Lullaby

as the stars descent upon the dark sky

a lullaby can be heard

let the deliciously warmed milk

put you to sleep

and its scent put you to ease

with her gentle hand patting your soft hair

may you fall asleep with mother’s care.

p.s

a poem written by my 13 year old daughter. what do you guys think? let me know.

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Celebrating life in rhythm and rhyme...
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26 Responses to Lullaby

  1. Sabiscuit says:

    It is a very sweet lullaby. I hope she’ll get to sing it to her children, someday.

  2. Kevin says:

    Very good. I’m impressed.

  3. hooklineandinkwell says:

    this is very good coming from a thirteen year old…it is a joy to see poets blossom so early…well-done

  4. BunKaryudo says:

    That’s very good. My poems at her age usually began “roses are red, violets are blue” and then added with a stupid joke in the next two lines. Not exactly sophisticated, I’m afraid.🙂

  5. Saloni says:

    Very advanced for someone her age. It’s beautiful!

  6. secretangel says:

    Absolutely beautiful!!! Definitely beyond a 13 year old!

  7. awe… I love this sweet poem!🙂 ♥❤

  8. xaranahara says:

    Wow. She is a wonderful poet already.

  9. Léa says:

    A budding poet! Well done.

  10. Very endearing. Thanks for following my blog, I appreciate your support.

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