Felt your
                                   Eyes on fire
                       Burned through my veins.
                         The touch of your skin,
                      Encroaching down my chin.
                       I savor your sweet kisses,
                       Zizzling I need to surrender.
              The enduring embrace swept oh dear.
          I longed for each, you’re sweet fondle of care,
            Wanting longer for more, you smile I gaze,
                    Moving gently I sigh like in daze.
                   The words unspoken I know dear.
                        Beating in great resonance,
                              I remembered at once.
                               These and all in there
                                    Sincerely yours
                                          You are


I read a poem written by a very talented Amit Raman, which according to him the form was inspired by another gifted blogger Geetha B (check out their sites too)…. and in return, I was inspired to write in the same form too. Amit and Geetha B, thanks so much for bringing up a very beautiful form like this.

I have been in the blogging world for a while and I am enjoying, at the same time learning a lot…



  1. What a lovely Etheree and I am astounded to hear it is your first time. I love this form which I myself got from Shiva M. I agree with you that it is a very beautiful form and you have really paid homage to it appropriately. What a beautiful read and with my favourite subject (perhaps all poets favourite subject) Love. Thank you Mich for the mention. By coincidence this was the first poem that my reader opened to 🙂
    By the way, wordpress now allows you to actually center your writing so this form works well when centered by WP. The only issue being that the reader does not show the formatting so it would show as a triangle there.

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    1. I am using my tablet while writing because i can’t wait to be home and use my laptop to enjoy WP more… and yeah i am reminded too of Shiva.. and again yes this is the first time i tried this form…thanks a bunch..

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    1. Oh yeah i failed to tell you i had tried writing one already. From amit who said he got it from geetah who in returned said it was you thats why i have to check out your work,…thanks so much Shiva


      1. Thank you so much! I would love to invite you to subscribe. I publish articles like those regularly. That’s the theme of my blog–practical, helpful blogging tips. I offer free incentives as well.

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