Silenced

When
I am
Oh so damn
To whom I run?
And make me like fun?
I am sad and lonely
Alone, in this dark alley
I will tell you I need a time
Go out wonder, explore and be fine
I can’t, you think this is where I should be.
When
I am
Feeling blue
I write a cue
That so you might know
I am hurt in deep woe
Writing didn’t make it go
You think I suck should never do
Dark alley is where my place to be
Eternally damned forever muted.
When
I am
Desperate
And in great hate
I run for refuge
To your smile oh so huge
I run unto you no more
I can’t find my way through your door
You shut them leaving no air to fill
This dark alley forever my soul will.

p.s.

Another shot at etheree. Triple etheree this time… once again my thank you goes to Geetha B, Shiva, and Amit.

12 Comments

  1. Geetha B says:

    I really like this one Mich. It flows like the tides and the form is really well adapted to it. Kudos to you

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    1. michnavs says:

      As what you said in my first etheree i will be in awe as i keep on outdoing myself as i write…i really am enjoying ang loving the form.. thanks Geetha…

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      1. Geetha B says:

        Welcome and you’re inspiring awe as well Mich. Keep enjoying and writing

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      2. michnavs says:

        More to come Geetha.

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  2. Amit Rahman says:

    Awesome poem! I’m greatly honored!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Amit…

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      1. Amit Rahman says:

        you are welcome!

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  3. Parveen Sabharwal says:

    Great mood and wow

    Liked by 1 person

    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Parveen .. its great to know you liked it.

      Liked by 1 person

  4. moonskittles says:

    A beautiful poem both in content and form. 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much …

      Like

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