Death

I can’t remember; be true to myself
I get used to being kept on a shelf.
People could just admire and see,
The loveliness stored in me.
The last time my mind speak
I was muted…deaf.
I longed the sound…
Never found.
I ceased.
Lapsed.
Hence,
Silence.
I blubber.
Lost soul ever.
The day I holler,
I cried in great despair.
Sorrow help me find my way
I wept in deepest agony
I anguish, wishing to be sober
I am silently dead, longer, deeper.

P.S.

Another etheree for everyone…
Geetha, Shiva, Amit,….. thanks once again

30 Comments

  1. sheldonk2014 says:

    It’s not so much of what we were
    As much as what we are now

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    1. michnavs says:

      Beautiful insight… thank you…

      Like

  2. Geetha B says:

    Oh wow, you’re on an etheree spree and getting so much more of the flow every time. I love this one too, it really seems to suit you the form because one can feel you somehow liberated by it’s flow into unburdening yourself of emotions (unless I am mistaken). Enjoy Mich šŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      i am indeed enjoying.. the form truely flows along with my emotions… you are correct with the “unburdening”, but not on the level as it has written… as poets we have the power to create emotions and feelings and thoughts on levels one might not be able to understand… but one thing for sure, this one has been really great

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      1. Geetha B says:

        Whatever drives it, keep going as it is coming out great šŸ™‚

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      2. michnavs says:

        I will indeed… big thanks to you… for the support..

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      3. Geetha B says:

        Welcome. It is fantastic to watch people excel in something that they are passionate about

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      4. michnavs says:

        I am in gratitude indeed

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  3. Amit Rahman says:

    I concur with Geetha… you are definitely on an Etheree spree šŸ˜€ … lovely poem!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Amit…

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      1. Amit Rahman says:

        you are welcome!

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  4. Afzal Moolla says:

    poignant. moving. brilliant! šŸ‘āœŒāœŠ

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    1. michnavs says:

      It is truely, but there is redemption at the end…

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      1. Afzal Moolla says:

        true , very true

        šŸ˜ŠāœŠāœŒšŸ‘

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  5. Magnetizing; your words pulled me in. Very potent!

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    1. michnavs says:

      It is my joy to know that this poem has that effect on you…

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    2. michnavs says:

      The form (etheree) really helps a writer come up with beautiful blend of words considering the structure and syllable count…thus bringing out the best words there is without compromising the whole idea

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      1. Beautifully stated. šŸ™‚

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  6. sean2lovedee says:

    Thank you for reading my blog. I feel free when I can express myself. I really enjoy your writing thank you for the inspiration.

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  7. midimike says:

    Wonderful poem. I loved the pace when I read it out loud.

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    1. michnavs says:

      That’s wonderful …

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  8. Kally says:

    Nice.. Love the poem, very emotional

    Liked by 1 person

    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks kally.. glad you like it

      Liked by 1 person

  9. Janice Wald says:

    Hi,
    At first it sounded happy!
    I met you on Danny Ray’s site. Congratulations on being his featured blogger. I was his featured blogger too! Maybe you can check out my blog.
    Janice

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks for dropping by.. surely will visit your site..

      Like

  10. hooklineandinkwell says:

    Really nice work with the mirrored etheree. It’s a beautiful form and I see you have learned it from great poets šŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

    1. michnavs says:

      Yes.. this is what is amazing about this blogging world

      Liked by 1 person

      1. hooklineandinkwell says:

        šŸ™‚ it is

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  11. Hi Michnavs. Nice to hear from you hope all is well. Now death is something none of us can escape from! Thank you for liking my poem Wait! Peace and Best Wishes. The Foureyed Poet.

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    1. michnavs says:

      I have always been a fan of your poetry..

      Like

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