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14 Comments

  1. hooklineandinkwell says:

    Love how you start with blood and end with home…there is nothing like blood to keep us grounded…I guess, in some ways, it’s like saying home is where the blood (family) is

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    1. michnavs says:

      You are right… i am glad you like it

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      1. hooklineandinkwell says:

        I did, very much.

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  2. Geetha B says:

    Wow Mich I am impressed. You keep amazing me with your talent in flying high with the forms. I am really so proud of your beautiful poems (lol, almost like as if I were your mom or something 😀 ). Really lovely and I share the feeling Thomas had about the succession in the poem.

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    1. michnavs says:

      I am grateful to you for indtroducing me to this form.. i found Thomas too who introduced you to this.. i am really amazed myself too with how the brevette turned out.. thanks again Geetha..

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      1. Geetha B says:

        Welcome and I am glad you found Thomas and he found you and your brevettes 🙂

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  3. Miriam says:

    Very succinct and powerful. Love it.

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    1. michnavs says:

      it is indeed..Thank you

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  4. I am always happier when I read one of your lovely writing, keep going 😉
    Sabrina – http://OrganicIsBeautiful.com

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    1. michnavs says:

      it is every writer’s wish to be able to make our readers smile and be happy along with us. .and I am glad my poems has that kind of effect on you.

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  5. The brevity of the stanzas can’t conceal the depth of their meaning. Profound and to the point!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you.. glad you like it

      Like

  6. My salutations to this HOME.
    Shiva

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