Strange thing inside,
Creeping through outside.
Inexplicably bizarre,
Truly peculiar.

Yearning to cry,
Wanting to try.
Humbly keeping,
Patiently crawling.

Sentiment so pure,
Believing so sure.
Beautifully affectionate,
Tenderly passionate.

Moment so magical,
Amazing yet sensational.
Wonderfully screaming,
Perfectly loving.

Wanting, trying, believing, loving.


About michnavs

Celebrating life in rhythm and rhyme...
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31 Responses to Loving

  1. rosemawrites says:

    oh wow. wow, Mich! πŸ™‚ This is oozing with love!

  2. Beautifully written β™₯

  3. jademwong says:

    Aww…there’s so much love in this poem πŸ™‚

  4. Your writing touched my soul. Splendid!

  5. Bun Karyudo says:

    It seems a very passionate poem to me.

  6. J L Hunt says:

    Very lovely piece & blog πŸ™‚ I’ve nominated you the the “Blogging Recognition Award.” You can view on my post here… https://huntsclubhouse.wordpress.com/2016/08/23/blogger-recognition-award/ Congrats!

  7. Qaiser says:

    I’ve been beaten to the draw by your friends here. May I add, the beauty of the words, the emotions streaming through out the poem and the rhythm (beat) you maintained throughout each compliment the other. It’s am all-round hit!

  8. It feels gorgeous and pure ❀

  9. You know what really amazes me about this poem is how incredibly intimate it is, so tender and yet not one human or part of a human is mentioned. It’s so well done! It’s passionate and yet there’s a quietness about it, a kind of silence that comes with love and loving. Really great writing. Thank you for posting!

  10. Hi michnavs Cannot remembering like that myself. Seemed to have missed that sensation! Thank you for liking my poems “Premonition! Perfection! Throwing! The Ships! and Band Of Seven!” Peace and Best Wishes. The Foureyed Poet.

  11. Its all in there, but we always feel every bit of that cause it’s part of life, especially we are growing up.

  12. Lovely compilation! πŸ™‚

  13. Christy B says:

    The tenderness of this poem, particularly its ending, caught me! xx

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