Loving

A strange thing inside,
Creeping through outside.
Inexplicably bizarre,
Truly peculiar.

Yearning to cry,
Wanting to try.
Humbly keeping,
Patiently crawling.

A sentiment so pure,
Believing so sure.
Beautifully affectionate,
Tenderly passionate.

A moment so magical,
Amazing yet sensational.
Wonderfully screaming,
Perfectly loving.

Wanting, trying, believing, loving.

31 Comments

  1. rosemawrites says:

    oh wow. wow, Mich! πŸ™‚ This is oozing with love!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Indeed it is ..thanks

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  2. Beautifully written β™₯

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks…glad you like it

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  3. jademwong says:

    Aww…there’s so much love in this poem πŸ™‚

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  4. Your writing touched my soul. Splendid!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks a lot …i am glad you like it..

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  5. Bun Karyudo says:

    It seems a very passionate poem to me.

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    1. michnavs says:

      You are right on that..

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  6. J L Hunt says:

    Very lovely piece & blog πŸ™‚ I’ve nominated you the the “Blogging Recognition Award.” You can view on my post here… https://huntsclubhouse.wordpress.com/2016/08/23/blogger-recognition-award/ Congrats!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks for the nomination will check it out.

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  7. Nisthur Anadi says:

    Beautiful !😊

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      1. Nisthur Anadi says:

        😊

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  8. Qaiser says:

    I’ve been beaten to the draw by your friends here. May I add, the beauty of the words, the emotions streaming through out the poem and the rhythm (beat) you maintained throughout each compliment the other. It’s am all-round hit!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks a lot.. i am glad you like it

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  9. Qaiser says:

    *it’s an ..m

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  10. It feels gorgeous and pure ❀

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    1. michnavs says:

      Indeed it is. Thanks

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  11. You know what really amazes me about this poem is how incredibly intimate it is, so tender and yet not one human or part of a human is mentioned. It’s so well done! It’s passionate and yet there’s a quietness about it, a kind of silence that comes with love and loving. Really great writing. Thank you for posting!

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    1. michnavs says:

      That’s really wonderful that you are able to see the stillness in each syllable… the quiet longing of the speaker…

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  12. Hi michnavs Cannot remembering like that myself. Seemed to have missed that sensation! Thank you for liking my poems “Premonition! Perfection! Throwing! The Ships! and Band Of Seven!” Peace and Best Wishes. The Foureyed Poet.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you for stopping by.

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  13. Its all in there, but we always feel every bit of that cause it’s part of life, especially we are growing up.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Its a process… lifelong process actually..

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  14. Lovely compilation! πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks.. glad you like it

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  15. Christy B says:

    The tenderness of this poem, particularly its ending, caught me! xx

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Christy…i have a little problem with your poetry site…i can’t see you in my reader anymore..

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