Window

 

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A passage out into

The vast expanse

Of the universe

A momentary glimpse

Of a heart and  soul

Seeking into the world

Going free,

Breaking forth,

Taking flight,

Freedom.

 

 

25 Comments

  1. Miriam says:

    Beautiful. Eyes to the world.

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  2. Mich!
    In this ten line poem you have said everything that one could and that too in such few words.
    It is marvelous. The title is also Apt. In the image from the Window it could have been something showing a landscape or something that is bit vast, it is my opinion.
    Congrats!
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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you for stopping by and giving beautiful insights.. i am now able to see you in my wp reader

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  3. Atomic Words says:

    its short but describes so much! i like how it makes me feel like a bird! lol

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    1. michnavs says:

      Soar high….fly high..we can all be birda fying freely in the vastness of the universe..

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  4. The freedom to soar is a lovely thing. Beautifully expressed!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Freedom in its simplest form…

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  5. rosemawrites says:

    so love love love each line and each word, Mich! This has a great aura of breaking free!

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    1. michnavs says:

      I am so glad u love it…freedom in its simple vagueness…

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      1. rosemawrites says:

        yes indeed! 😀 vaguely beautiful

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  6. Beautiful, yes we only get a short glimpse through our narrow gaze of our section of world within the vastness of space within the Universe. May we all break free to seek further and expand our awareness of our surroundings … loved your poem teamed with the image.. very apt . ❤ Sue

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Sue..insights like yours make writing even more inspiring
      ..i do hope though that i may be able to touch others through my poetry..

      Thanks again..

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      1. I am sure you will touch many a heart with your beautiful words Michnavs..

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      2. michnavs says:

        With great hopes Sue…

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  7. Davy D says:

    A nice poem Mich. There is something about windows that draw the poetic spirit from us. They invoke the feelings of capture and freedom.

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    1. michnavs says:

      I agree with you on that..the window could bring out a lot of emotions…

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  8. beautifully written…

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you for stopping by…

      Like

  9. Hi michnavs Different windows many different views! Thank you for liking my poem “Wooded Copse!” Peace and Best Wishes. The Foureyed Poet.

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  10. Oh freedom! The window speaks so much of what’s behind the window is freedom.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Freedom in its simplest form…

      Like

  11. agenda19892010 says:

    Dear. See the sky between the lines….see thought between the lines….the emptiness. 🌟🌟🌟🌟. Ciao.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Ohhh…that’s a wonderful observation…thank you …i am glad you shared that..

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      1. agenda19892010 says:

        Thanks. Have a nice day. Ciao.

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