Window

 

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A passage out into

The vast expanse

Of the universe

A momentary glimpse

Of a heart and  soul

Seeking into the world

Going free,

Breaking forth,

Taking flight,

Freedom.

 

 

About michnavs

Celebrating life in rhythm and rhyme...
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25 Responses to Window

  1. Miriam says:

    Beautiful. Eyes to the world.

  2. Mich!
    In this ten line poem you have said everything that one could and that too in such few words.
    It is marvelous. The title is also Apt. In the image from the Window it could have been something showing a landscape or something that is bit vast, it is my opinion.
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  3. Atomic Words says:

    its short but describes so much! i like how it makes me feel like a bird! lol

  4. The freedom to soar is a lovely thing. Beautifully expressed!

  5. rosemawrites says:

    so love love love each line and each word, Mich! This has a great aura of breaking free!

  6. Beautiful, yes we only get a short glimpse through our narrow gaze of our section of world within the vastness of space within the Universe. May we all break free to seek further and expand our awareness of our surroundings … loved your poem teamed with the image.. very apt .❤ Sue

  7. Davy D says:

    A nice poem Mich. There is something about windows that draw the poetic spirit from us. They invoke the feelings of capture and freedom.

  8. beautifully written…

  9. Hi michnavs Different windows many different views! Thank you for liking my poem “Wooded Copse!” Peace and Best Wishes. The Foureyed Poet.

  10. Oh freedom! The window speaks so much of what’s behind the window is freedom.

  11. agenda19892010 says:

    Dear. See the sky between the lines….see thought between the lines….the emptiness. 🌟🌟🌟🌟. Ciao.

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