Confusion

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A hundred folded colors
Rocking around in chorus
A thousand milestones
Swarming around in tones

Mine, yours, ours
Never theirs

But you leave it hanging there..

About michnavs

Celebrating life in rhythm and rhyme...
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18 Responses to Confusion

  1. Such an interesting verse and architectural photo share..
    All comes around in circles, but we must never forget we are at the centre despite all the outward confusion..
    Lovely..
    Blessings Sue xxx

  2. sheldonk2014 says:

    I love this
    simply beautiful
    Sheldon

  3. rosemawrites says:

    the photo complimented your deep words, Mich. Reflective and contemplative.❤

  4. Great piece! Interesting poem as it blend to your beautiful photo.

  5. Davy D says:

    Now I have the inside track Mich it all makes perfect sense. Nice poem.

  6. Aquileana says:

    Excellent verses … I like the way you describe juxtaposition. And its direct effect: confusion ..
    The ending line is ironic… a funny twist…🙂
    Very well penned!… Love & best wishes. Aquileana😀

    • michnavs says:

      You got it right there is indeed a funny story behind the poem and i just cant help but include that…giving an ironic ending to what is suppose to be a serious poem dealing with a serious theme as well..

  7. Miriam says:

    Amazing photo that lead down to some equally well written and amazing words, I enjoyed this.

  8. Dead Donovan says:

    You described confusion perfectly with sounds and colors.

    ~PR

  9. Hi michnavs More money spent on buildings than the people! Thank you for liking my poem “Squatted!” Peace and Best Wishes #TheFoureyedPoet.

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