Confusion

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A hundred folded colors
Rocking around in chorus
A thousand milestones
Swarming around in tones

Mine, yours, ours
Never theirs

But you leave it hanging there..

18 Comments

  1. Excellent verses … I like the way you describe juxtaposition. And its direct effect: confusion ..
    The ending line is ironic… a funny twist… 🙂
    Very well penned!… Love & best wishes. Aquileana 😀

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    1. You got it right there is indeed a funny story behind the poem and i just cant help but include that…giving an ironic ending to what is suppose to be a serious poem dealing with a serious theme as well..

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