I
see you
I felt you
as I move fast
the downtown alley
your beautiful I know
the scent of you smell hunts me
everywhere I go you are there
I feel you in all of my senses
you’re just like a detail in the fabric
gone
as worn
drenched when soaked
tattered in time
broken in pieces
drained where the water flows
forgotten in time you go
remembered once but never twice
held once more felt over smelled again
for you are a detail in the fabric.
P.S.
Double etheree this time.
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Michelle Ayon Navajas is an international best-selling poet. Her 5th poetry book, "I Will Love You Forever, Too" went straight to the number ONE spot in Amazon and Kobo.Com on its first day of release in less than 24 hours. She also authored the poetry books "After Rain Skies", "What If Snowflakes Don't Fall In Winter?", "Oh! Dear One", "I Would Fly To Where You Are" and "After Rain Skies, 2nd Edition". She is a published author at Spillwords NYC, a three-time "Publication of the Month" nominee. Her poem "Holding Hands" is a Publication of the year in at Spillwords NYC for 2021. Her poetry appeared in several international literary magazines and anthologies.
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Awesome!
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thanks Christy .. great to see you..
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The scent of your smell hurts me
I love that line
As always Sheldon
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Thanks…your comments are really appreciated..
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Love it Mich. Great feeling throughout.
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Thanks so mirriam
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Very nice!
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😊
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“remembered once but never twice” ~ this is great! Another heartbreaking piece. </3 🙂
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Truely heartbreaking…thank you for stoppin by
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It is. </3 I'm afraid we'll turn into masochist for loving heartbreaking poems like this one. ^^
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“remembered once but never twice”
oooh. oh Mich! this is such an emotive take…. soooo good!
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Thanks Rose..i am smiling…i am also happy i made my first wordpress challenge..
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awwwww. glad to know that!! looking forward to more! ❤
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the scent of you smell hunts me
everywhere i go you are there
i feel you in all of my senses
your just like a detail in the fabric
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i loved this part… beautiful … !! 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Thank you..great to know you like it…
It is painfully beautiful indeed.
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An excellent poem Mich. I love the contrast of the capitalised I and lower case I as the poem progresses. It adds to the pain.
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Thanks..i am enjoying this whole challenge…
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Beautiful piece. I love the description of his memory like torn fabric!
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Thanks..glad you like it that way
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