I
see you
i felt you
as i move fast
the downtown alley
your beautiful i know
the scent of you smell hunts me
everywhere i go you are there
i feel you in all of my senses
your just like a detail in the fabric
gone
as worn
drenched when soaked
tattered in time
broken in pieces
drained where the water flows
forgotten in time you go
remembered once but never twice
held once more felt over smelled again
for you are a detail in the fabric.
P.S.
Double etheree this time.
In response to November Notes Writing Challenge hosted by Sarah Doughty of Heartstring Eulogies and Rosema of areadingwriter.
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Awesome!
thanks Christy .. great to see you..
The scent of your smell hurts me
I love that line
As always Sheldon
Thanks…your comments are really appreciated..
Love it Mich. Great feeling throughout.
Thanks so mirriam
Very nice!
😊
“remembered once but never twice” ~ this is great! Another heartbreaking piece. </3 🙂
Truely heartbreaking…thank you for stoppin by
It is. </3 I'm afraid we'll turn into masochist for loving heartbreaking poems like this one. ^^
“remembered once but never twice”
oooh. oh Mich! this is such an emotive take…. soooo good!
Thanks Rose..i am smiling…i am also happy i made my first wordpress challenge..
awwwww. glad to know that!! looking forward to more! ❤
the scent of you smell hunts me
everywhere i go you are there
i feel you in all of my senses
your just like a detail in the fabric
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i loved this part… beautiful … !! 🙂 🙂 🙂
Thank you..great to know you like it…
It is painfully beautiful indeed.
An excellent poem Mich. I love the contrast of the capitalised I and lower case I as the poem progresses. It adds to the pain.
Thanks..i am enjoying this whole challenge…
Beautiful piece. I love the description of his memory like torn fabric!
Thanks..glad you like it that way