Between the Lines

Unspoken words,

I heard for the first time

Twas scornfully fair

Yet romantically dear.

 

Uncleared intentions,

I resolved this moment.

So spitefully adoring

But clearly confusing.

 

Unfelt fondness,

Relished by now.

How painstakingly fragile

And affectionately frail.

 

You hurt me. You broke me.

 

Day Four Prompt: Between The Lines – Sara Bareiles
In response to November Notes Writing Challenge hosted by Sarah Doughty of Heartstring Eulogies and Rosema of A Reading Writer.❤

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27 Responses to Between the Lines

  1. An excellent poem for You hurt me You broke me.. xxx Sending Love your way for the weekend Michnavs.. xxx Sue

  2. sheldonk2014 says:

    Very powerful
    Great read
    Simply beautiful
    Sheldon

  3. Another lovely, lilting read!

  4. mandibelle16 says:

    This is neat “affectionaly frail” and “painstakingly fragile” almost oxymorons I think. But very interesting🙂 I like your take!

  5. rosemawrites says:

    oh those last two lines!!! goodness. stab the heart!!

    but sooooooo good!

  6. Lovely and full of mixed feelings. Life and love are confusing.

  7. maria says:

    *heart breaks into pieces* Sigh

  8. Davy D says:

    Wow Mich. That last verse and last line really hit you.

  9. I felt the heavy emotion that you’re trying to convey. A well written poem 😁

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