Day 7 prompt: Yellow by Cold Play
In response to NovemberNotes challenge hosted by SarahDoughty of Heartstring’s Eulogies and Rosema of A Reading Writer
I see you, baby,
In cold summer day
Wondering how to get you
I melted like a dew.
The sun shone brightly
On your skin, oh so lovely
Remembering how it flickers
In the meadow with my sneakers.
I wish I could tell you
Your beauty is a few
Every man will have fun
To stay with you in the sun…
“Its cold summer day, baby”

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Michelle Ayon Navajas is an international best-selling poet. Her 5th poetry book, "I Will Love You Forever, Too" went straight to the number ONE spot in Amazon and Kobo.Com on its first day of release in less than 24 hours. She also authored the poetry books "After Rain Skies", "What If Snowflakes Don't Fall In Winter?", "Oh! Dear One", "I Would Fly To Where You Are" and "After Rain Skies, 2nd Edition". She is a published author at Spillwords NYC, a three-time "Publication of the Month" nominee. Her poem "Holding Hands" is a Publication of the year in at Spillwords NYC for 2021. Her poetry appeared in several international literary magazines and anthologies.
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Oh wow. Beautiful lines here! This sounded like a song to me the more I read it. π
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Thanks Marian…glad you like it..
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These lines are both beautiful and powerful!
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Thank you…
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A great poem and take on the prompt Mich. I love the lines ” Remembering how it flickers,
In the meadow with my sneakers” It creates great imagery.
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Thanks Davy…i wanted to write a humurous love poem but that’s how far i get..
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Mich, greatness has emerged from the ruins lol. It’s still a great poem no matter which way you approached it π
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You made me smile…π
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That’s thrown in free as part of the fan club subscription lol π
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Great take! Like the rock and roll or r & b take. I think you like that style π
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Yeah…i just realized that too…
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All you need is a tune and you’ve got yourself a song π
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I wish i could do that…really..
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awwww, this feels like a song, a lovely love song! β€
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Ohhhh you all have the same notion..i should commision someone to put a melody on this
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yaay! and let us hear it!! π π π
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Remember well the days I thought it cool to wear sneakers.. π LOL..
Lovely poem.. I was just looking upon the list of music.. I confess to knowing only a few within that list.. π
Have a great day xxx Hugs Sue x
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I also dont know most of the songs in the list that’s why it has also become very challenging but i am enjoying so far …
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Haha… oh thank goodness.. Now I feel much better haha.. β€
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