Day 7 prompt: Yellow by Cold Play
In response to NovemberNotes challenge hosted by SarahDoughty of Heartstring’s Eulogies and Rosema of A Reading Writer
I see you baby
In cold summer day
Wondering how to get you
I melted like a dew.
The sun shone brightly
On your skin, oh so lovely
Remembering how it flickers
In the meadow with my sneakers.
I wish i could tell you
You’re beauty is a few
Every man will have fun
To stay with you in the sun…
“Its cold summer day, baby”
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Oh wow. Beautiful lines here! This sounded like a song to me the more I read it. š
Thanks Marian…glad you like it..
These lines are both beautiful and powerful!
Thank you…
A great poem and take on the prompt Mich. I love the lines ” Remembering how it flickers,
In the meadow with my sneakers” It creates great imagery.
Thanks Davy…i wanted to write a humurous love poem but that’s how far i get..
Mich, greatness has emerged from the ruins lol. It’s still a great poem no matter which way you approached it š
You made me smile…š
That’s thrown in free as part of the fan club subscription lol š
Great take! Like the rock and roll or r & b take. I think you like that style š
Yeah…i just realized that too…
All you need is a tune and you’ve got yourself a song š
I wish i could do that…really..
awwww, this feels like a song, a lovely love song! ā¤
Ohhhh you all have the same notion..i should commision someone to put a melody on this
yaay! and let us hear it!! š š š
Remember well the days I thought it cool to wear sneakers.. š LOL..
Lovely poem.. I was just looking upon the list of music.. I confess to knowing only a few within that list.. š
Have a great day xxx Hugs Sue x
I also dont know most of the songs in the list that’s why it has also become very challenging but i am enjoying so far …
Haha… oh thank goodness.. Now I feel much better haha.. ā¤
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