Cold Summer Day

Day 7 prompt: Yellow by Cold Play

In response to NovemberNotes challenge hosted by SarahDoughty of Heartstring’s Eulogies and Rosema of A Reading Writer

 

I see you, baby,
In cold summer day
Wondering how to get you
I melted like a dew.

The sun shone brightly
On your skin, oh so lovely
Remembering how it flickers
In the meadow with my sneakers.

I wish I could tell you
Your beauty is a few
Every man will have fun
To stay with you in the sun…

“Its cold summer day, baby”

 

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20 Comments

  1. maria says:

    Oh wow. Beautiful lines here! This sounded like a song to me the more I read it. πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Marian…glad you like it..

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  2. These lines are both beautiful and powerful!

    Like

  3. Davy D says:

    A great poem and take on the prompt Mich. I love the lines ” Remembering how it flickers,
    In the meadow with my sneakers” It creates great imagery.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Davy…i wanted to write a humurous love poem but that’s how far i get..

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      1. Davy D says:

        Mich, greatness has emerged from the ruins lol. It’s still a great poem no matter which way you approached it πŸ™‚

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      2. michnavs says:

        You made me smile…😊

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      3. Davy D says:

        That’s thrown in free as part of the fan club subscription lol πŸ™‚

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  4. mandibelle16 says:

    Great take! Like the rock and roll or r & b take. I think you like that style πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yeah…i just realized that too…

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  5. NJ says:

    All you need is a tune and you’ve got yourself a song πŸ˜€

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    1. michnavs says:

      I wish i could do that…really..

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  6. rosemawrites says:

    awwww, this feels like a song, a lovely love song! ❀

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    1. michnavs says:

      Ohhhh you all have the same notion..i should commision someone to put a melody on this

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      1. rosemawrites says:

        yaay! and let us hear it!! πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€

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  7. Remember well the days I thought it cool to wear sneakers.. πŸ™‚ LOL..
    Lovely poem.. I was just looking upon the list of music.. I confess to knowing only a few within that list.. πŸ™‚
    Have a great day xxx Hugs Sue x

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    1. michnavs says:

      I also dont know most of the songs in the list that’s why it has also become very challenging but i am enjoying so far …

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      1. Haha… oh thank goodness.. Now I feel much better haha.. ❀

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      2. michnavs says:

        πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€

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