Give me time

Let me find the fountain of youth

Or maybe Neverland

So we can be kids again together

So that our happily ever after

Can last forever after

But you give me lies instead

So let me find the courage to let you go.

In response to NovemberNotes challenge by Theresah of Heartstring Eulogies and Rosema of A Reading Writer

Day 21 prompt: Recreational by Aaron Krause



20 Replies to “Lies”

      1. I could write about periodic dramatic ugly cluster-headache-pain pamphlets and may be even books, but I prefer to do something else. Have you ever been in an hospital at 3:30 a.m. just in order to get some medicine oxygene for 20 minutes because otherwise you start to get really “crazy”? So I am wondering why you are writing about it. Never mind and take care.

  1. Very interesting. I get the feeling they’re both lying, the speaker is looking for places which don’t exist, and he/she is lying. So the speaker leaves, but honestly, they’re both the same. Not a good relationship. Great write!

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