Pain

Stealthy pains
Furtive lies
Secret implies

I am bleeding.
I am hurting.

From a distance

 

In response to NovemberNotes challenge hosted by Theresa Doughty of Heartstrings Eulogies and Rosema of A Reading Writer.

Day 19 Prompt: Pain Told Love by Tribe Society

9 Comments

  1. NJ says:

    I’ve been reading so many posts on hurt and pain and it’s just so heartbreaking. Each post describes it so beautifully, it makes me want to send a lot of love and hugs around. So, that’s what I’m doing. Whether the words are fiction or not, hugs and love cannot destroy the world 🙂 🙂

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    1. michnavs says:

      i am smiling as i read your comment. i didn’t realize that i have been writing mostly about pain and hurt lately up and until you said so… i am yet to discover why this has been my trend.. lol.

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      1. NJ says:

        Oh, not just you. Others too, myself included. We all have written so many pieces on it. I guess words really do help in letting it all out 🙂

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      2. michnavs says:

        Yes Nj…you are right..

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  2. Davy D says:

    True words in this poem Mich. Sometimes we have to take a step back no matter how hard it hurts. Another excellent thought provoking poem.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks so much Davy…😊😊

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  3. rosemawrites says:

    so simple. so painful. so… me.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Ooohh…😌😌😌

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