Scream

I’m screaming your name

In the middle of nowhere

At 2 am

In a raging thunderstorm

Our bodies are small

But our hearts are as big as the world

It’s big enough for everyone we love

Our days are dark

But our hearts are brighter than the sun

It’s enough for everyone.

 

In response to NovemberNotes challenge by Theresa  of Heartstring Eulogies and Rosema of A Reading Writer

Day 20 prompt: Floodgates by Colbie Cailat

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14 Comments

  1. Davy D says:

    Love this one MIch. The line “At 2 m” stops you in your tracks. There are so many interpretations of this that take the poem in different directions.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Its so good to know you’re able to see beyond the physical time mentioned in the poem Davy…..thank you..

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  2. sheldonk2014 says:

    Insatiable appetite

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    1. michnavs says:

      Great to know that…

      Like

  3. rosemawrites says:

    “Our bodies are small

    But our hearts are as big as the world”

    Wooow! such an intense poem! 🙂

    Like

    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you… glad you like it..

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      1. rosemawrites says:

        you’re welcome! ❤

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  4. Dead Donovan says:

    Screaming is thrilling to me! Your words made me tremble.

    ~PR

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    1. michnavs says:

      Ooohh…it did?….

      Like

  5. mandibelle16 says:

    I like the line, our hearts are brighter then the sun. It’s beautiful 🙂

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Mandy😊

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  6. 👌 What a scream this is.
    Beautiful Mich!
    I just loved that… our bodies are small but our heart as big as the world.👌
    Shiva

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Shiva…happy holidays…

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  7. small bodies + big hearts = hope! 🙂 💜 Jackie@KWH

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