I took the wrong lane,

I traveled the wrong path,

I trudged the wrong way,


Baby i made it to you,

Mama was there every step

of my way.

In response to NovemberNotes challenge by Sarah of Heartstrings Eulogies and Rosema of A Reading Writer

Day 24 prompt: Buses and Trains: Bachelor Girl



About michnavs

Celebrating life in rhythm and rhyme...
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15 Responses to Mama

  1. Wow. Wonderful! Also, you’re still not showing up in my reader. I’m going to try to unfollow/follow to see if it fixes the bug.

  2. Davy D says:

    Excellent poem Mich. Mothers stay with us no matter what mistakes we make or what paths we follow 🙂

  3. rosemawrites says:

    awww. such a sweet sweet sweet piece. indeed. ❤

  4. NJ says:

    This is such a touching post about mothers 🙂

  5. Joel F says:

    So sweet and truthful. Beautiful.

  6. Jade M. Wong says:

    Ahh, a simple poem, but stunning all the same.

    BTW, you show up in my reader with no issues 🙂

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