Flame

Hot and tempting;

BURNED, I AM.

A flame 

You are to me!

In response to NovemberNotes challenge by Sarah of Heartstrings Eulogies and Rosema of A Reading Writer

Day 25 prompt: Up in Flames by Ruelle

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About michnavs

Celebrating life in rhythm and rhyme...
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14 Responses to Flame

  1. sheldonk2014 says:

    Where there’s smoke there is fire

  2. Davy D says:

    Hot, hot, hot Mich. I love the way you have italicized the second line, it brings the poem quickly into focus.

  3. Paul says:

    Terrific poem. Just enough ambiguity in the first line to make it so enticing. Plus, the idea of “flame”–something that gives light and HEAT!

    Great poem thanks for sharing.

  4. Nothing quite as tantalizing as the heat of a flame. Sizzling!

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