I hurt you, i know
I got crazy sometimes, that’s sure
Your scolding annoyed me, most often
You suck at everything, i always say
But baby, i love you even then.
I am sick and tired, i think so
I went wild for most of the time, i say
You’re a brat , and i scorned you for that
You run back home, I’d prod you
But baby, i’ll miss you when you’re gone.
I needed a break, on this heart ache
I can be gone myself and never comeback
Your smile is all i need to make it all go away
You are what i always dreamed of to have
So baby, please don’t give up on me.
‘Cos I can never make it through without you.
- In response to NovemberNotes challenge by Sarah of Heartstrings Eulogies and Rosema of A Reading Writer
Day 26 prompt: For the First Time: The Script
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hang on indeed. This poem flips between asking him to stay and telling him to go. Sometimes all we can do is hang on and ride it out.
You’re right…sometimes all we really need is to hang on…thank you for dropping by..
You’re welcome
Awesome! I’m receiving you now too. 😊
Yey..that’s great..
It’s always a love hate relationship
I have to remind myself
There another adult in the room
Thanks Sheldon..as always
I agree with Melinda. All we can do is hold on and hope.
Yes NJ…thanks so much for stopping by always.
You’re most welcome, Mich 🙂
A good take and poem on today’s prompt Mich. In most relationships there is a point where we feel we are hanging on and those feelings and frustrations come through in your poem.
You are right Davy…😊
So true and very heartfelt
Thanks Mirriam..
Love this because we are all imperfect and do stupid things at times, But forgiving and often overlooking these flaws and idiocincrisys is vital in any relationship. People can’t help but be themselves, their flaws included. Your words show this well.
Ooohh that’s wonderful point Mandy…thank you so much for always sharing your thoughts..
You’re welcome
The heart can play such a cruel game of tug-of-war! Well captured poem.
Thanks Rose…it is indeed a cruel tug of war game..🤗
oh. oh. this is sooo heartfelt my dear. every line.
Thanks Rose… thank you too for hosting this challenge..it pushed me to write poetries with themes i never thought i could write..
awwwwwww. i am glad to do just that my dear. ❤ ❤ ❤
Big smiles as I read this.. Sometimes you can not live with them but you can not live without them… 🙂 lol… I have so enjoyed reading your poetic verse during this challenge.. well done to you xx
Thank you…its been really a fun month….the challenge has pushed me to the edge of my poetic boundaries so to say…
You have excelled yourself xxx