You

You

You were everything i wanted to be
You were all that i ever had to be
I would give you the world if i could
I would stay with you if i should

Baby, i know i love you, i must say
And i love you more everyday
I wish you all the luck in the world
And i will send you all the love to hold

But baby, you’re not mine
So i keep these and many others in time
Till then my love i will love you still
In the other life maybe, you will.

I love you, it hurts, i know

P.S.

Another random thoughts in a coffee shop as i listened to the story told by a girl next to my table.

 

50 Comments

  1. NJ says:

    This is so romantically beautiful πŸ™‚β€οΈ

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    1. michnavs says:

      Evesdropping can be very helpful..lol..

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  2. Jade M. Wong says:

    Aww unrequited love is one of the saddest things in life, I think ❀ It's amazing the poetry you can compose from listening to another's story πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      I think its my “thing”…lol…sneaking into someone else’s heart and mind…thanks Jade.

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  3. Yes, sometimes LOVE Hurts.. lovely poem Mich.. and great to see you in my reader this evening..
    Sending my love my friend ❀

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    1. michnavs says:

      Hi..Sue..thanks for stopping by….
      πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“sending back the love too..

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      1. Its always a pleasure to spot a post from you Mich xx

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  4. sheldonk2014 says:

    Great piece of creativity
    Simply beautiful
    As Sheldon Always

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks sheldon..

      Hope all is well in you outhere…

      Like

  5. maria says:

    Why do I have this wild feeling that I was that girl sitting next to you? Awwee.. I love ever lines- it’s not just because of the words but the emotion that goes with it. My hopeless romantic heart melts… ❀

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    1. michnavs says:

      Actually Maria my heart was crushed when i heard her story… and i wanted to do something to make her feel better but you i just can’t do that…so while listening to her venting out her emotions in between sobbing i wrote this poem..

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      1. maria says:

        Aww.. she must have been through a lot. Did she knew you wrote this? I hope she reads this and know she’s not alone. πŸ™‚ You have a kind, warm heart Mich. ❀

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      2. michnavs says:

        I personally don’t know the girl but i am hoping i’d see her again ..

        Like

  6. Miriam says:

    So moving. I’m sure many can relate. ❀️

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yes Mirriam i am pretty sure many can indeed relate

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  7. rosemawrites says:

    awwwww. there is sooo much love amid pain in this piece. this is *kilig*

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yes rose so much pain in there… you could only imagine the girl sobbing so hard..

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      1. rosemawrites says:

        yes. yes. yes. 😦

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  8. Davy D says:

    Beautiful Mich. Another one that flows off the tongue with the rhythm of a song πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks davy.. as always..

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  9. mandibelle16 says:

    Lovely very lyrical indeed are you doing NaPoWriPo?

    Liked by 1 person

    1. michnavs says:

      I wanted too… been reading bout that..

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      1. mandibelle16 says:

        It’s a lot of fun. The website provides a prompt everyday with several parts so you can pick and choose πŸ™‚

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      2. michnavs says:

        Thanks Mandy

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  10. mandibelle16 says:

    Sorry NaPoWriMo. See NaPoWriMo.net if you’re not and sign up πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      I will thanks Mandy

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  11. Harbans says:

    Love flows like current of a rivulet. Wonderful sharing indeed. :))

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you..😊

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      1. Harbans says:

        My pleasure. :))

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  12. Eccentric Muse says:

    Unrequited love. *sighs* Beautifully done.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you😊

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      1. Eccentric Muse says:

        Most welcome! πŸ™‚

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  13. Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
    SAD, UNREQUITED LOVE…PRESENTED BY AN ON-THE-BALL POETRY WITH EARS OPEN! BRAVO!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Oohhh thank you for the reblog and the kind commentary..

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      1. ORT, ORT ! πŸ™‚

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  14. Singledust says:

    oh so loved this one! I know how it is to love someone that cannot belong to me – this said it all! you captured the heart’s content so well.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you…welcome on board..

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  15. Ah, so heart wrenching and tragically beautiful! Lovely work, songstress.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Rose, as always…

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  16. You are the You that I cannot be You as I love You to the core
    My wait for You shall be there till You come with open arms and I shall be You in You ultimately it is You and You that matters, You!
    Mich! This is something which relates to all who loves and You have extracted the You in all You See!πŸ˜€πŸŽΆ
    Shiva

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    1. michnavs says:

      Ohh beautiful Shiva…may i use this in one of my future poems?

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      1. Why not Mich I shall be delighted, may be I also shall refer it some time when time permits, as I have an idea of which you shall come to know in the mean time. Hahaha
        Go ahead I am eager to know. Please let me know about it.
        Shiva

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      2. michnavs says:

        Thanks Shiva…it would be a great collaboration..

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  17. grevisangel73 says:

    It pays to pay attention. There’s subject matter everywhere just waiting.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yes. .Thanks for stopping by..

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      1. grevisangel73 says:

        I will continue, I am trying to go through all your posts.

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      2. michnavs says:

        so kind.of you…Thanks and I hope you enjoy reading. .

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      3. grevisangel73 says:

        I know that I will.

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  18. Christy B says:

    It’s tough when you love someone but still cannot be with them… A touching poem ❀

    Liked by 1 person

    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Christy..☺

      Like

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