You

You

You were everything i wanted to be
You were all that i ever had to be
I would give you the world if i could
I would stay with you if i should

Baby, i know i love you, i must say
And i love you more everyday
I wish you all the luck in the world
And i will send you all the love to hold

But baby, you’re not mine
So i keep these and many others in time
Till then my love i will love you still
In the other life maybe, you will.

I love you, it hurts, i know

P.S.

Another random thoughts in a coffee shop as i listened to the story told by a girl next to my table.

 

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About michnavs

Celebrating life in rhythm and rhyme...
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48 Responses to You

  1. NJ says:

    This is so romantically beautiful πŸ™‚β€οΈ

  2. Jade M. Wong says:

    Aww unrequited love is one of the saddest things in life, I think ❀ It's amazing the poetry you can compose from listening to another's story πŸ™‚

  3. Yes, sometimes LOVE Hurts.. lovely poem Mich.. and great to see you in my reader this evening..
    Sending my love my friend ❀

  4. sheldonk2014 says:

    Great piece of creativity
    Simply beautiful
    As Sheldon Always

  5. maria says:

    Why do I have this wild feeling that I was that girl sitting next to you? Awwee.. I love ever lines- it’s not just because of the words but the emotion that goes with it. My hopeless romantic heart melts… ❀

    • michnavs says:

      Actually Maria my heart was crushed when i heard her story… and i wanted to do something to make her feel better but you i just can’t do that…so while listening to her venting out her emotions in between sobbing i wrote this poem..

  6. Miriam says:

    So moving. I’m sure many can relate. ❀️

  7. rosemawrites says:

    awwwww. there is sooo much love amid pain in this piece. this is *kilig*

  8. Davy D says:

    Beautiful Mich. Another one that flows off the tongue with the rhythm of a song πŸ™‚

  9. mandibelle16 says:

    Lovely very lyrical indeed are you doing NaPoWriPo?

  10. mandibelle16 says:

    Sorry NaPoWriMo. See NaPoWriMo.net if you’re not and sign up πŸ™‚

  11. Harbans says:

    Love flows like current of a rivulet. Wonderful sharing indeed. :))

  12. Eccentric Muse says:

    Unrequited love. *sighs* Beautifully done.

  13. Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
    SAD, UNREQUITED LOVE…PRESENTED BY AN ON-THE-BALL POETRY WITH EARS OPEN! BRAVO!

  14. Singledust says:

    oh so loved this one! I know how it is to love someone that cannot belong to me – this said it all! you captured the heart’s content so well.

  15. Ah, so heart wrenching and tragically beautiful! Lovely work, songstress.

  16. You are the You that I cannot be You as I love You to the core
    My wait for You shall be there till You come with open arms and I shall be You in You ultimately it is You and You that matters, You!
    Mich! This is something which relates to all who loves and You have extracted the You in all You See!πŸ˜€πŸŽΆ
    Shiva

  17. It pays to pay attention. There’s subject matter everywhere just waiting.

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