You
You were everything i wanted to be
You were all that i ever had to be
I would give you the world if i could
I would stay with you if i should
Baby, i know i love you, i must say
And i love you more everyday
I wish you all the luck in the world
And i will send you all the love to hold
But baby, you’re not mine
So i keep these and many others in time
Till then my love i will love you still
In the other life maybe, you will.
I love you, it hurts, i know
P.S.
Another random thoughts in a coffee shop as i listened to the story told by a girl next to my table.
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This is so romantically beautiful 🙂❤️
Evesdropping can be very helpful..lol..
Aww unrequited love is one of the saddest things in life, I think ❤ It's amazing the poetry you can compose from listening to another's story 🙂
I think its my “thing”…lol…sneaking into someone else’s heart and mind…thanks Jade.
Yes, sometimes LOVE Hurts.. lovely poem Mich.. and great to see you in my reader this evening..
Sending my love my friend ❤
Hi..Sue..thanks for stopping by….
💓💓💓sending back the love too..
Its always a pleasure to spot a post from you Mich xx
Great piece of creativity
Simply beautiful
As Sheldon Always
Thanks sheldon..
Hope all is well in you outhere…
Why do I have this wild feeling that I was that girl sitting next to you? Awwee.. I love ever lines- it’s not just because of the words but the emotion that goes with it. My hopeless romantic heart melts… ❤
Actually Maria my heart was crushed when i heard her story… and i wanted to do something to make her feel better but you i just can’t do that…so while listening to her venting out her emotions in between sobbing i wrote this poem..
Aww.. she must have been through a lot. Did she knew you wrote this? I hope she reads this and know she’s not alone. 🙂 You have a kind, warm heart Mich. ❤
I personally don’t know the girl but i am hoping i’d see her again ..
So moving. I’m sure many can relate. ❤️
Yes Mirriam i am pretty sure many can indeed relate
awwwww. there is sooo much love amid pain in this piece. this is *kilig*
Yes rose so much pain in there… you could only imagine the girl sobbing so hard..
yes. yes. yes. 😦
Beautiful Mich. Another one that flows off the tongue with the rhythm of a song 🙂
Thanks davy.. as always..
Lovely very lyrical indeed are you doing NaPoWriPo?
I wanted too… been reading bout that..
It’s a lot of fun. The website provides a prompt everyday with several parts so you can pick and choose 🙂
Thanks Mandy
Sorry NaPoWriMo. See NaPoWriMo.net if you’re not and sign up 🙂
I will thanks Mandy
Love flows like current of a rivulet. Wonderful sharing indeed. :))
Thank you..😊
My pleasure. :))
Unrequited love. *sighs* Beautifully done.
Thank you😊
Most welcome! 🙂
Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
SAD, UNREQUITED LOVE…PRESENTED BY AN ON-THE-BALL POETRY WITH EARS OPEN! BRAVO!
Oohhh thank you for the reblog and the kind commentary..
ORT, ORT ! 🙂
oh so loved this one! I know how it is to love someone that cannot belong to me – this said it all! you captured the heart’s content so well.
Thank you…welcome on board..
Ah, so heart wrenching and tragically beautiful! Lovely work, songstress.
Thanks Rose, as always…
You are the You that I cannot be You as I love You to the core
My wait for You shall be there till You come with open arms and I shall be You in You ultimately it is You and You that matters, You!
Mich! This is something which relates to all who loves and You have extracted the You in all You See!😀🎶
Shiva
Ohh beautiful Shiva…may i use this in one of my future poems?
Why not Mich I shall be delighted, may be I also shall refer it some time when time permits, as I have an idea of which you shall come to know in the mean time. Hahaha
Go ahead I am eager to know. Please let me know about it.
Shiva
Thanks Shiva…it would be a great collaboration..
It pays to pay attention. There’s subject matter everywhere just waiting.
Yes. .Thanks for stopping by..
I will continue, I am trying to go through all your posts.
so kind.of you…Thanks and I hope you enjoy reading. .
I know that I will.
It’s tough when you love someone but still cannot be with them… A touching poem ❤
Thanks Christy..☺