Till Then (Summer Rain, still)

Till Then (Summer Rain, still)

There isn’t time
‘Tis moment, you’re gone
Parting is such a sweet sorrow
It seems eternity
To savour the warmth of your hold
But time fleets, i realized
And here i am
Grieving the thought
I’ll be losing you in time
I feared there aren’t long rides to come
I dreaded there aren’t stories to share
There isn’t even a song to sing to
There isn’t remaining love notes to read
I only have my poems-
These silent, lifeless verses
That would make me remember you
Just the trails of lingering memories
My poems
My bleeding poems
As i watched over the rain
On a hot summer afternoon…


About michnavs

Celebrating life in rhythm and rhyme...
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25 Responses to Till Then (Summer Rain, still)

  1. Singledust says:

    you are slowly becoming my favourite love poetry to read – such softness I feel my heart sigh. “I dreaded there aren’t stories to share” – my biggest dread too like you spoke my heart’s cry. And I loved the last 2 closing lines, they seem to say so much in so few words. Heavy like the weight of the humid summer air.

  2. Eccentric Muse says:

    Beautifully written!

  3. Davy D says:

    Singledust has summed it up. Beautifully written poetry Mich.

  4. mandibelle16 says:

    Beautiful and sorrowing. I love the line “trails of lingering memories” . I know this speaker has to move on but I can sense how hard it is for her, her struggle. Great job.

  5. Ginger says:

    I feel your deep sadness … time for growth!

  6. rosemawrites says:

    this just left me crying. 😦

  7. Heart wrenching and gripping poem, Mich. Both rain and poetry do bleed — stunning metaphor.

  8. Till Then!!!
    A wonderful feeling till then!

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