The Sun is Up

The sun is up, finally in days

Of raining and wind blowing.

The sun has shown

After days of hiding.

The sun is scorching hot

After days of iced-cold breeze.

But the sun hasn’t been up yet

In my heart for days of longing.

The sun hasn’t shown still

In my being for days of weeping.

It still feels like raining without you

On a hot summer day.

 

P.S.

The rain has finally stopped. But for some weird reasons i can’t get over with the “summer rain” thought. So here’s hoping that this is my final version of my summer rain installment.

27 Comments

  1. novelistbaba says:

    WoW!!! beautiful……….in my experience……eventually the winds change……bring in a new season……for better or for worst……..but they always change……All the best and God Bless!!! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you..good to see you here..

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      1. novelistbaba says:

        good to see you too……and always a pleasure reading you!!! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

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  2. Singledust says:

    rain is very inspiring evident from your beautiful words here, and its been non stop where I am too -and as much as I love the rain its not been raining according to my schedule!!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Ohh thank you for your beautiful thougts…😊

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  3. splendid…I love the way you constructed the lines. You have a good ear.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Matthew …☺

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  4. NJ says:

    Wow! You’re really going guns blazing with the summer rain theme. And they are all perfect πŸ™‚ I love how you’ve connected the actual rain to the way you feel too. Sending you some happy sunshine to warm you ❀ ❀

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks nj…been really wonderfull doing the summer rain theme…

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  5. Davy D says:

    I like the contrast in your poem Mich. The weather can’t change how we feel on the inside.

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    1. michnavs says:

      That’s right Davy…thanks for stopping by..☺

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      1. Davy D says:

        A pleasure as always Mich. Have a great week.

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  6. eliza rudolf says:

    Well βœ’ pennedπŸ‘πŸ‘Œ

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you…

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      1. eliza rudolf says:

        Yr welcome…πŸ™‚πŸ€—

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  7. When it rains, it pours.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Indeed…thanks for stoppin by.

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  8. πŸ˜€πŸŽΆπŸ™πŸ‘πŸ™‹

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    1. michnavs says:

      Really flattered…thanks

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  9. When it rains, it pours… how poetic! πŸ˜‰ πŸ™‚ πŸ’œ Jackie@KWH

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Jackie. ..indeed when something came up…you just can’t stop it…

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      1. Yup… gotta go the way the water flows! πŸ˜‰ πŸ™‚ πŸ’œ Jackie@KWH

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  10. grevisangel73 says:

    You can never go wrong with rain.

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    1. michnavs says:

      I believe so too..

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      1. grevisangel73 says:

        I am not so fond of snow. It was nice when I was a kid.

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