It Still Rains

No, not yet, not yet…

Let your eyes speak

Of roses in bloom

Remind me once again

Of the chalice of love we shared

Where fiery choir

Sang our song

At the blazing sun.

Shed no tears, not yet…

The midnight air

Still whispers your name

And deep from the abyss,

Creature of the night

Echoes my grief

Make me remember the picture

We make out of the clouds,

Hold my hand

And let us fly to the sky.

It’s still raining my love…

 

 

 

 

24 Comments

  1. NJ says:

    Oh my! This feels like an olden golden poem. Lovely 🙂

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Nj…yeah …intentionally wanted to bring out that “old/classic” poem.

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  2. Wonderful Mich.. keep flying and holding hands with those you love..
    Hugs xxx and Much Love your way x

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Sue…have a blessed week

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  3. maria says:

    Oh dear.. somehow I have a feeling the rain is coming from the inside. Sigh.. This reminds me of the lyric, “why does the sun go on shining? why does the sea rush to shore? don’t they know it’s the end of the world? cause you don’t love me anymore..”

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    1. michnavs says:

      Sighhhh…we can only sigh…lol…and ohh that song…an old lovely song…thanks Maria..

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  4. Davy D says:

    Lovely poem Mich. Sometimes we need the rain, so we can enjoy the sun when it warms our hearts.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks davy…

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  5. Osyth says:

    This is beautiful. Just beautiful. Because beautiful can be rain washed and tear stained as well as sun-blushed.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Ohhh…so poetic ..i love that ..

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      1. Osyth says:

        I only EVER say what I mean! And I do mean to read more and more of you work. It will take me a little time because I am a person who prefers to do things properly. I am delighted our paths have crossed and hope we can meander along happily for a long long time!

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      2. michnavs says:

        Thanks so much Osyth..really wondeful that you found me..i am honored

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  6. So good it’s still raining….
    I love it as the drops of love reach my body and enter into my soul. 😃🎶
    Shiva

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    1. michnavs says:

      So melodious response you have in there hah..

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  7. rosemawrites says:

    awwwwww. this is so tender and gentle. tugs the heartstrings dear. ❤

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Rose…!!!

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      1. rosemawrites says:

        always, Mich!

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  8. samba2017 says:

    Thanks for sharing, I really enjoyed the line about the picture made out of clouds. I have a poetry blog here on WordPress in case you have time to look? Have a good Thursday, Sam 🙂

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Sam…will go check our poetry blog too…

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      1. samba2017 says:

        Thanks very much! Sam 😀

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