O, Summer Rain Don’t Go

O Summer Rain Don’t Go

Loveless tide swept
In the seashore
Where i once stand
Alone and unsure

There, we’re together
Walking by the shore
Looking gently at the sea
Gazing through your smile

Our eyes met then
Our hearts touched
As deeply we felt
That loving feeling within

But now its gone
Carried by the tide
Back to the sea
Where once we’re together

Bring back my love oh thee
In the seashore where we shared
The afternoon summer rain drizzle
Over our kisses and sweet embrace.

Oh summer rain don’t go
No, not yet i can’t let go..

P.S.

It seemed to me that summer rain isn’t over, as it still continues to inspire me with beautiful thoughts and endearing moments…that rain, once shared with the one you love is perfectly beautiful no matter what time of the year it may come.

Ahhhhh summer rain..look what have you done !!!

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About michnavs

Celebrating life in rhythm and rhyme...
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49 Responses to O, Summer Rain Don’t Go

  1. I do feel so ‘O rain don’t go’it is such good feeling.

  2. Singledust says:

    your summer rain continues to flow and so beautifully too, reminds me that it is better to have and lost then to have never loved at all. I love the walking by the shore that was just magical to me. I understand how the summer rain can be so inspiring, your words take me on such a romantic ride.

  3. Jade M. Wong says:

    I adore this poem! I almost could feel the rain on my skin, it was relaxing and cleansing and invigorating all at once!

  4. Marts says:

    Well I hope it doesn’t go, because I’ve really enjoyed your summer rain poems… Thanks for sharing…

  5. Eccentric Muse says:

    Beautiful poem! You have me wishing for it to rain here πŸ™‚

  6. There is a lot of meaning even in those first four lines! Nicely done. πŸ™‚

  7. Davy D says:

    We could do with some of this rain over in the UK at the moment Mich. Keep up these poetic prayers and send them over πŸ™‚

  8. This piece of sumner rain completely drenched me in bliss !! Lovely work Mich ❀ ❀

  9. NJ says:

    I’m picturing myself walking on the shore and your words sung out in a musical form and it is so beautiful 😊❀️

  10. R L Cadillac says:

    I love what you’ve done with “rain”–it inspires me also!

  11. Eyes met and hearts touched.. Beautiful Mich.. And I so enjoyed this poem… Rain we get plenty of.. πŸ™‚ without it, life on earth would not be so beautiful… And your poem was very beautiful.. ❀

  12. ANM7 says:

    You have a gift. Seldom do I find people who have been gifted, where life has been prearranged by the God of creation to forge a servant, one who would bring something to the lives of others. This gift you have is a road, however, a conveyance, merely. I know this sounds nuts. But you will see, God intends the more. Forgive my presumptuous chatter. Thank you.

    • michnavs says:

      oh, thank you. .really thank you for sharing you beautiful insights…and thank you for appreciating the gift God has given to me..at some point I stopped writing. …but one day I realized…how many people out there who wanted so much to write but can’t. ..While here I am wallowing over some issues stopping me from sharing my gift. ..
      your thoughts and the thoughts of others who appreciate in my gift warm my hearts. .

  13. Aquileana says:

    This is so beautiful… The waves comes and go… And so does certain “special people” in our lives. Hopefully we can keep the good memories, no matter the circumstances of the break up. πŸ˜‰ Wishing you the best, dear poet! ⭐

    • michnavs says:

      Thanks. .and yes we keep the good memories of every single person we’ve met..as always we have to see the good in even the worst situation/s…Thanks for stopping by..

  14. Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
    SOAKED US RIGHT TO THE HEART OF THE MATTER!!!!! πŸ™‚

  15. Thank you for reminding me of the summer. We just got 4 inches of snow on April 20 … spring, where are you? Summer, I remember you, I think, rain and all!

    • michnavs says:

      Thanks Roger…I live in a tropical country so we don’t experience winter here. ..I always wonder how it is to witness snowflakes falling. .

      • Nice when they start in October or November … but when they continue into April, absolutely horrible! November to April means six months of snow this year … yuck and double yuck. But we love that first snow … Where are you, in the tropics?

  16. Hi michnavs Long time since I walked in the rain with a partner been alone over thirty years! Thank you for liking “Regret!” Best Wishes. TheFoureyedPoet.

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