O, Summer Rain Don’t Go

 

Loveless tide swept

In the seashore

Where I once stand

Alone and unsure

There, we’re together

Walking by the shore

Looking gently at the sea

Gazing through your smile

Our eyes met then

Our hearts touched

As deeply we felt

That loving feeling within

But now it’s gone

Carried by the tide

Back to the sea

Where once we’re together

Bring back my love oh thee

In the seashore where we shared

The afternoon summer rain drizzle

Over our kisses and sweet embrace.

Oh summer rain don’t go

No, not yet I can’t let go…

 

 

 

P.S.

It seemed to me that summer rain isn’t over, as it still continues to inspire me with beautiful thoughts and endearing moments…that rain, once shared with the one you love is perfectly beautiful no matter what time of the year it may come.

Ahhhhh summer rain..look what have you done !!!

52 Comments

  1. I do feel so ‘O rain don’t go’it is such good feeling.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Oh thank you Shiva..great to see you stop by

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  2. Singledust says:

    your summer rain continues to flow and so beautifully too, reminds me that it is better to have and lost then to have never loved at all. I love the walking by the shore that was just magical to me. I understand how the summer rain can be so inspiring, your words take me on such a romantic ride.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you gina for that wonderful insights…yeah rain can be very endearing while at the same time can trigger so many emotions…

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      1. Singledust says:

        i do agree my dear! my pleasure

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  3. Jade M. Wong says:

    I adore this poem! I almost could feel the rain on my skin, it was relaxing and cleansing and invigorating all at once!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Jade …mr sun has taken his revenge though lately…so i kinda feel sad by now…rain is slowly going away…

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    2. in567 says:

      Me too. Agreed.

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      1. michnavs says:

        ooh thank you..

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  4. Marts says:

    Well I hope it doesn’t go, because I’ve really enjoyed your summer rain poems… Thanks for sharing…

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    1. michnavs says:

      I am delighted to know you enjoyed my summer rain poems…thank you so much…

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  5. Eccentric Muse says:

    Beautiful poem! You have me wishing for it to rain here πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Sending you lots of love…hope it rains there…

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      1. Eccentric Muse says:

        πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

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  6. There is a lot of meaning even in those first four lines! Nicely done. πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks OM…Glad to see you stop by..

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  7. Davy D says:

    We could do with some of this rain over in the UK at the moment Mich. Keep up these poetic prayers and send them over πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Wishing you some rain over there Davy…πŸ’­πŸ’­πŸ’­and thank you for stopping by.

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      1. Davy D says:

        It worked Mich, we had some rain overnight. Thank you πŸ™‚

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  8. This piece of sumner rain completely drenched me in bliss !! Lovely work Mich ❀ ❀

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    1. michnavs says:

      Ohh thanks…so nice of you to say thay….πŸ˜‡

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      1. My pleasure Mich πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you☺

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  9. NJ says:

    I’m picturing myself walking on the shore and your words sung out in a musical form and it is so beautiful 😊❀️

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    1. michnavs says:

      Oh Nj i really wish i could make a melody out of this one..i just sometime soon i would be able to hum a tune again..

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  10. R L Cadillac says:

    I love what you’ve done with “rain”–it inspires me also!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks. ..I am glad you were inspired as well. .

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      1. R L Cadillac says:

        You’re most welcome πŸ™‚

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  11. Eyes met and hearts touched.. Beautiful Mich.. And I so enjoyed this poem… Rain we get plenty of.. πŸ™‚ without it, life on earth would not be so beautiful… And your poem was very beautiful.. ❀

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Sue…happy easter out there..

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      1. ❀ Much LOVE ❀

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks. ..Welcome on board..

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      1. slowpoke1977 says:

        Thank you. I love poetry. Its great to find people that love it just as much as me. I enjoy reading your poetry. I hope you like mine as well.

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  12. ANM7 says:

    You have a gift. Seldom do I find people who have been gifted, where life has been prearranged by the God of creation to forge a servant, one who would bring something to the lives of others. This gift you have is a road, however, a conveyance, merely. I know this sounds nuts. But you will see, God intends the more. Forgive my presumptuous chatter. Thank you.

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    1. michnavs says:

      oh, thank you. .really thank you for sharing you beautiful insights…and thank you for appreciating the gift God has given to me..at some point I stopped writing. …but one day I realized…how many people out there who wanted so much to write but can’t. ..While here I am wallowing over some issues stopping me from sharing my gift. ..
      your thoughts and the thoughts of others who appreciate in my gift warm my hearts. .

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      1. ANM7 says:

        Hopefully we bring the cinder, the spark, keep it where it can be dispensed.

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  13. Aquileana says:

    This is so beautiful… The waves comes and go… And so does certain “special people” in our lives. Hopefully we can keep the good memories, no matter the circumstances of the break up. πŸ˜‰ Wishing you the best, dear poet! ⭐

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks. .and yes we keep the good memories of every single person we’ve met..as always we have to see the good in even the worst situation/s…Thanks for stopping by..

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  14. Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
    SOAKED US RIGHT TO THE HEART OF THE MATTER!!!!! πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      ohh thank you…

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  15. Thank you for reminding me of the summer. We just got 4 inches of snow on April 20 … spring, where are you? Summer, I remember you, I think, rain and all!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Roger…I live in a tropical country so we don’t experience winter here. ..I always wonder how it is to witness snowflakes falling. .

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      1. Nice when they start in October or November … but when they continue into April, absolutely horrible! November to April means six months of snow this year … yuck and double yuck. But we love that first snow … Where are you, in the tropics?

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      1. Anita Bacha says:

        You’re most welcome 😊

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  16. Hi michnavs Long time since I walked in the rain with a partner been alone over thirty years! Thank you for liking “Regret!” Best Wishes. TheFoureyedPoet.

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  17. Summer rain is a beautiful feeling till it lasts

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