Five haiku poems:Bruised, yet hopeful

This is my first collaboration with the brilliant Rose of Poet Rummager…

Within this brick wall, lies my heart where no light shines. Rejected, it sleeps. Hidden in the dark – dreaming so damn hard and tight. You’re not mine, it weeps. In this tiny room, my heart beats against the stone – bruised yet still hopeful. Bleeding and in pain, it yearns to be free again. […]

via Five Haiku Poems: Bruised, Yet Hopeful — Poet Rummager

48 Comments

    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Yassy

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      1. yassy says:

        Welcome, Michnavs.

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  1. Aw, thanks so much, Mich! Your beautiful words inspired it all.

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  2. Miriam says:

    A wonderful collaboration. 💕

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Mirriam…its amazing how words can bring two people together no matter how physical distance there may be..

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      1. Miriam says:

        Yes I agree. It’s brilliant.

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  3. writteninthestars2016 says:

    Awesome 🌟

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks. ..if you get the chance visit Rose’s blog she’s brilliant

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  4. oglach says:

    The two of you work very well together, Mich. Beautiful poetry.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Og, really happy to know you enjoyed it..

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  5. Osyth says:

    Stop it! That is too stunning for my paltry words to express ….

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    1. michnavs says:

      ohh thank you dear…this is.my first collaboration with Rose of Poet Rummager…and it worked well..

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  6. NJ says:

    Ooh, this is a wonderful collaboration 🙂

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Nj..we spoke about collaborating months ago and here it is…

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  7. Such beautiful words Mich and a lovely collaboration… I really enjoyed.. Much love for a peaceful weekend xx

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Sue..indeed a beautiful collaboration. .Rose is such a brilliant artist

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  8. Beautiful and dark, words to draw one in – I’m still trying to breathe after reading them!

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    1. michnavs says:

      oh thank you..really happy to know that..

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      1. I’m looking forward to reading more!

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  9. Singledust says:

    brilliant MICH! In this tiny room, my heart beats against the stone – “bruised yet still hopeful”. – I was holding my breath reading, I love how it speaks with gentleness yet such fervor!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Gina…at times we have to be like that ….gentle but firm…

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      1. Singledust says:

        it was very powerful!

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  10. merrildsmith says:

    As I commented on Rose’s blog–lovely and seamless blending of both of your voices.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks and I am happy to check on your blog too.

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  11. Davy D says:

    A fantastic collaboration Mich and some wonderful haikus came out of it. I love the flow as one poem.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Davy, Rose is indeed a brilliant poet. .I suppose you visits her site too..

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      1. Davy D says:

        I will have a read of more of her poetry Mich. I have enjoyed what I have read so far.

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      2. michnavs says:

        That’s great Davy. ..Rose would be very delighted to have you on board..

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  12. rosemawrites says:

    wow. this is one brilliant duet my dear! 🙂 ❤

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Rose….meet Rose too of PoetRummager…a brilliant poet…and a Pinoy based in the US

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      1. rosemawrites says:

        oh wow. that’s amazing!

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  13. MC Clark says:

    I don’t know who wrote what, but you and Rose penned a seamless collaboration. Beautiful and poignant. Bravo!
    Cathy

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Cathy….that’s really wonderful of you to say that…

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  14. Great work! Your blogs inspired me to write something!

    Looking forward for read your next blog! 🙂

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks. ..keep writing. ..

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  15. Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
    WHOO-HOO FOR THESE HAIKU! 🙂

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks for the re blogged. .

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    1. michnavs says:

      I’m glad you like it..

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks so much.

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  16. If he’s left u already are free

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      1. Uhhhh we all go through this

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