Silenced (Triple Haiku)

 

Adored you I wept
In the silence of my heart
I whispered and sighed

I sat beside you
Not a word even to say
Let me walk away

I will trudge through there
That long narrow road, I’ll be
Walk with me my love

 

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53 Comments

  1. Osyth says:

    Such a haunting poem. Very, very beautiful

    Liked by 3 people

    1. michnavs says:

      Oohh thank you Osyth….😊😊

      Liked by 1 person

  2. Beautiful poem.. Which speaks of sorrow and loss and yet unity forever in our hearts

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    1. michnavs says:

      You enunciated it pretty well Sue…thank you always for your kind thoughts…

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      1. ❀ ❀ ❀

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  3. Jade M. Wong says:

    Such a sad piece…you can feel the emotion throughout.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Jade….it has been a very emotional week for the whole family….

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  4. oglach says:

    Beautiful haiku, Mich.

    Liked by 2 people

    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Og…happy to see you hear..

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  5. Davy D says:

    Beautiful poetry Mich.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Davy..

      Liked by 1 person

  6. NJ says:

    Together forever, no matter what. Sad but touchingly beautiful. How’s your family doing, Mich?

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    1. michnavs says:

      Been really an emotional week Nj…but i can see improvements in my daughter’s coping ..

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      1. NJ says:

        I can imagine. Sending love and hugs your way.

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      2. michnavs says:

        Thank you Nj..as always …

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aww thank you..

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  7. Beautiful sadness! You have all your readers walking with you at the meantime until your love comes by!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Ohh that’s sweet thank you Mirriam..

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      1. You’re welcome! Hope you feel well!

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      2. michnavs says:

        πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

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  8. Dead Donovan says:

    Lovely triple Haiku! I’ll walk with you anytime you need company, Mich.

    ~PR

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    1. michnavs says:

      That would be nice…just don’t bring your monster friends hehe

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Dead Donovan says:

        Ah, I never knew you wanted me all to yourself, Mich! πŸ˜€

        ~PR

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      2. michnavs says:

        Yeah lol…your creepy freinds scare me out…

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      3. Dead Donovan says:

        Soon, I’ll make you into a monster. You’re almost there. ❀️

        -PR

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      4. michnavs says:

        You guys at slasher monster are actually making me like creepy poems and stories….

        Like

  9. calmkate says:

    poignant and exquisite … know you are supporting each other thru this πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Kate…and by the way i am.sending my interview soon..

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      1. calmkate says:

        yeh looking forward to it πŸ™‚

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  10. maria says:

    Aw.. poignantly beautiful, Mich.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Maria..glad your bit active lately…

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      1. maria says:

        Trying to catch up one click at a time, Mich. πŸ™‚ Although I notice my muse needs a push after a month of literature drought.

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      2. michnavs says:

        That’s great Maria….maybe a cup of cappucino will help your muse unleash her power…πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”

        Liked by 1 person

      3. maria says:

        Been having my daily cup of cappuccino and the muse is getting greedy wanting another one. πŸ˜€

        Liked by 1 person

      4. michnavs says:

        That’s great…enjoy.

        Like

  11. rosemawrites says:

    the sadness and then the hope. oh this delivers the feeeels! ❀ ❀ ❀ love this darling.
    P.S. i love love love love love the cappuccino! thank youuu!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Rose…and i am glad you love the cappucino..until next time.

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      1. rosemawrites says:

        yes. πŸ™‚ ❀ ❀ ❀

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  12. Di says:

    A very beautiful and special poem, michnavs. There is so much emotion in this.
    Wishing you well πŸ’βœ¨βœ¨

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Di..happy to see you here.

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      1. Di says:

        You’re very welcome. And thank you… I’ll be here. I’m a bit slow at the reading and catching up part but I won’t forget you…πŸ’•πŸ’

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      2. michnavs says:

        πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡so nich of you..thank you.

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  13. You are a true romantic. I sense how lonely it can be to have a husband who works far from home. He’s lucky to have a beautiful wife who’s talented and kind hearted. πŸŒΈπŸ¦‹

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Rose…so nice of you to say that..☺☺☺

      Liked by 1 person

  14. sheldonk2014 says:

    Simply beautiful

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  15. mandibelle16 says:

    I enjoy the word “thrudge” through the long and narrow road, it’s wonderful description, what a person will do for another for love.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Indeed the things we do for love..

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  16. NMY says:

    Hi there. I tried looking for your contact page but couldn’t. Anyway, I saw you liked my latest post. Could I ask you to listen to the audio (I’ve fixed it). A little surprise I’ve got there. Thanks.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. michnavs says:

      Hi…okay will hop in there now…

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