The End

And just when all the
has to end
even the best ones.

And how one faces
it with a smile,
when all you’ve ever
wanted is forever?

And there you start
anew, despite
of not wanting
to let go.

And then oblivion
comes; forever
is again, yet
another word….

Between here and there



About michnavs

Celebrating life in rhythm and rhyme...
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69 Responses to The End

  1. calmkate says:

    Exquisite with an apt photo .. how deeply profound 😦

    • michnavs says:

      Thanks each elevator ride requires a way out…every ending no matter how difficult will always have a way out..

      • calmkate says:

        so true, what a sensitive and loving mother you are πŸ™‚

      • michnavs says:

        Thanks Kate…we just laid to rest Zoe yesterday…it was was ubearable but we were able to hold on to our emotions…my daughter was si brave for finishing her eulogy without breaking down…i believe the suggestions you made and that of the rest here in WP…helped a lot..

      • calmkate says:

        and we are all holding you both along with Zoe and her loved ones in our heart as this transition happens … never easy but love and support help heal πŸ™‚

      • michnavs says:

        Thanks so much kateπŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

  2. yassy says:

    Forever. Infinity. This evokes a lot of emotions.

  3. Deb says:

    Wow I love that photo. Are beginnings continuations of endings, just in another direction? I see you’ve had a loss, I’m sorry. May you keep with you all the happy moments and let go of the sad.

  4. Singledust says:

    i have been away without internet for a few days, just reading this. You raised a brave and compassionate child. revel in the love she shows to others, peace will descend. and life even like an elevator that goes up and down and seems mindless and unrewarding isn’t so, for people get on and off the elevator, it’s how treat them on the journey that matters. Love to you and the family my friend!

  5. Osyth says:

    This is touching and poignant and thought-provoking in quite an effortless way. The End. Another beginning. Zoe is part of that new beginning as she begins her new journey. I wish you all peace. πŸ™πŸΌ

  6. Wow oblivion is not the end it is just the beginning

  7. Davy D says:

    And poetry and words like this provide support on that journey. Blessings to you all Mich.

  8. I so sorry for your loss. Such a poignant tribute. Take care.

  9. Heart wrenching and poignant, dear Mich. Your beautiful words tug at my heart strings.

  10. Di says:

    Hello Michnavs,
    I could feel every word. As someone who doesn’t enjoy endings… you were perfect in expressing this in your beautiful poem πŸ’πŸŒŸπŸŒŸ

  11. rosemawrites says:

    oh my dear. the last final lines speak a lot. simple words weaved with such depthness. and the photo. again my condolences my dear.

  12. NJ says:

    Where one journey ends, another begins. May Zoe’s journey be filled with peace and love. Sending hugs your way, Mich.

  13. Nikki says:

    That photo looks surreal

  14. Eccentric Muse says:

    Very touching and I love the photo.

  15. slowpoke1977 says:

    Great photo, wonderful words…

  16. So sorry to hear about Zoe, MIch 😦 Through it all, though,
    I believe your daughter’s character is growing admirably
    strong and tall! Perfect photo for this post πŸ™‚ πŸ’œ Jackie@KWH

  17. andysmerdon says:

    Nice words and pic Mich. Blessings and peace πŸ™

  18. This is deep, beautiful and somehow feels solemn to me.

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  20. Profound thoughts put into words Mich.. and went perfectly with that image.. Infinity is endless, as onward we travel..
    Love and Blessings my friend..
    Sue ❀

  21. oneta hayes says:

    So sorry for your separation from your daughter. I know you are and will be lonely for her. She seems so talented. I also love the picture. Change comes but ends are beginnings. πŸ˜€

  22. Jerry Peri says:

    Powerful piece!

  23. mandibelle16 says:

    Like this poem. There isn’t an end but a cycle. And even oblivion is something new an not the end.

  24. Between Beginning and End
    The Long wait Forever
    Life fills up Wishes
    Efforts put to Fulfill
    By then comes the End

    Mich In my post we both have paid respects to Zoe.

    Have a nice Weekend, The End is yet to come. Hahaha

  25. sheldonk2014 says:

    Simply beautiful Mich
    Love the picture

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