The End (part 11)

 

And when I thought
I knew you…

And when your words
used to heal;
all wounds
seal.

And when you
listens to my
stories…

Then you said
“shut up”

I froze.

The end of my storytelling.

 

46 Comments

  1. Singledust says:

    oh did that really happen? my heart skipped a beat.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yeah…kinda…lol..

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      1. Singledust says:

        oh no sweetie! I so feel your hurt. In my past relationship the person I thought was going to be our the strength in our family – once turned up the volume in the car as I started to speak, I sank so deep into myself it has taken me a decade to resurface. It’s not you, it’s him / her, they are insecure narcissists! Don’t stop your story telling, we all have stories that needs telling and someone more worthy to listen.

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      2. michnavs says:

        Thanks Gina….i appreciate your wisdom

        Thank youπŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

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  2. Never stop telling your stories, Mich. You touch many people’s hearts; including me. Remember Dr. Seuss wise quote:
    “Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don’t matter, and those who matter, don’t mind.” xo

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    1. michnavs says:

      Ohhh thanks Rose..

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  3. Di says:

    Hello Michnavs,
    A very heartfelt post.
    Thank you for sharing it with us πŸ’

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Di…its a joy to see you here..

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      1. Di says:

        You are so lovely, Michnavs. Thank you. As it is a joy to see you in my posts too…
        All the best,
        Di πŸ’•πŸŒΉπŸ’•

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      2. michnavs says:

        πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

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  4. This was so incredibly heartfelt – you write beautifully, you made real emotion flow through a screen.
    Abby – https://seafoaming.com

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Abby…will go check on your site now.

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  5. Mich, I felt that stab of pain, go right through me.. So sad if you experienced this, Words can be cruel and stab deeper than a knife and leave unhealed scars..
    Do not let anyone tell you, that you can not write, or that you do not tell good stories, or write wonderful poetry.. Because dearest Mich, you write from your heart,, A true spirit, with love and compassion..
    Sending Huge Hugs your way .. ❀ Sue xxx

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    1. michnavs says:

      Oohhh Sue..it warms my heart..

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      1. πŸ’•πŸ’–

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  6. NJ says:

    Aww, Mich! Don’t listen to those voices. They don’t know what they are saying. I love what you write. You speak from the heart and your words are full of love, it touches my soul. So please, dear Mich, never ever stop❀️❀️

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Nj…☺☺☺

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  7. Davy D says:

    Mich, never stop telling your story. Scream it from the highest mountain.

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    1. michnavs says:

      I wont Davy..thank you..

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  8. I like the form of the poem, it serves the content well.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Robert…

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  9. Christy B says:

    Never let anyone saying that stop you from writing xx

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yeah..Christy..

      Like

  10. frankhubeny says:

    Find someone else to tell your stories to, however, I know that the rejection you wrote about can hurt.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Indeed Frank..πŸ˜‘

      Like

  11. markmkane says:

    Beautifully haunting words that really reflect what we all experience once or twice in our lives; guess it’s our life’s trial of finding that one person who’ll REALLY listen to our stories. Thanks for sharing.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks for your thoughts here…thank you..

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  12. That’s kind of mean for a reaction….

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    1. michnavs says:

      ☺☺☺i know right..

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  13. GILDASPOEMS says:

    Sorry this happened to you. But please never stop telling your story! The world would be a less rich place.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Oooh thank you for that..

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  14. Lady G says:

    Oh my! This one reached up and grabbed me by my collar! So profound! This is exactly how a creative mind is completely trashed by those who can’t see the value.
    Masterful!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks so much..i know and it is difficult..

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  15. Absolutely wonderful. Never stop your story telling.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Jacque..

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  16. Life’s ups and downs make us feel frozen and we tend to abruptly stop.
    So, Mich stories do not abruptly stop and we cannot make an end of it suddenly. πŸ™‚
    All the very Best Shower on You.
    Shiva

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  17. Ameena k.g says:

    This is heartbreaking.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Ohh..i know…

      Like

  18. Obviously I’ve come upon the frosting here – I will read the first ten if they exist. A poignant piece.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks so much..

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  19. sheldonk2014 says:

    Never stop your words
    There will always people
    Who don’t get it
    This happen to me today
    The person cut me off at the
    Knees,it’s like a tetanus shot
    It hurts for a while
    Then it goes away
    Big hugs Mich
    As Sheldon Always

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Sheldon…its always a joy to read your beautiful verses here…

      Be well…

      Like

  20. sheldonk2014 says:

    You to
    We got to stick together

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    1. michnavs says:

      😊😊

      Like

  21. Oh. so harsh when those words are spoken and the illusion shatters. Powerful.

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