Eternally (Triple Haiku)

 

 

Up unto the sky

Beyond life and even time

My treasure is you.

Over the night light

On the far side forever

My fondness is you.

And in afterlife

Farther than eternity

My passion is you.

 

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I have been following the blog of DavyD “inside the mind of DavyD” for a little while now. I used to write long narrative verses. I seldom write short poems and verses, until I discovered his works. He writes brilliant and amazing short poems and verses most especially when he’d accompany it with an equally stunning photograph or computer-generated images. And just then that I thought I could try it myself too. This afternoon, on the way home I took this stunning photograph and wrote a triple haiku alongside as my expression of my eternal devotion to my beloved and of course as inspired by Davy’s beautiful short verses.

I have been writing short poems for a while now. I enjoyed the most my haikus which actually lead to a wonderful haiku collaboration with the talented Rose of the Poet Rummager.

So here’s for Davy https://davydblog.com Β and Rose https://poetrummager.com for inspiring me to try on short poems.

57 Comments

  1. calmkate says:

    stunning photo, love the colours and delightful tributes to your lover – can you please add a link to DaveyD πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Lol..forget the link..hehe

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      1. calmkate says:

        thanks Mich πŸ™‚

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      1. calmkate says:

        thanks visited briefly as I’m about to go out but bookmarked it to look at when I have more time, thanks Mich πŸ™‚

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      2. michnavs says:

        Thank you kate😊

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  2. yassy says:

    Such a delightfully sweet post.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Yassy…always happy to see you here…😊

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      1. yassy says:

        So am I.

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  3. I love the photo, stunning, for sure. Beautiful triple haiku, I like how the third lines connect the three haikus. Wonderful work!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Oh thanks Miriam..i am glad you like it..

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  4. NJ says:

    Triple haiku, triple the delight in reading them 😊❀️

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Nj.

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  5. oglach says:

    Lovely poetry, Mich.

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  6. NMY says:

    Very nice done. The love comes out very strong. God bless your love. May your love, fondness, and passion always flourish. Am unable to follow the links😣

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks so much…happy to see you here..

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      1. NMY says:

        Happy to read you

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    2. michnavs says:

      I will send the link here again for you and see if you can get through them..

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  7. Davy D says:

    Mich the photo and poem are brilliant. I am humbled and honoured to have provided any inspiration. I agree with Miriam the connection between the three haikus is exquisite. You could put the haikus in any order and they would still work.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Davy…i have been writing short poems and haikus lately and i guess i am loving it..

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      1. Davy D says:

        Continue to write and share them Mich.

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  8. Your talent for both styles is a true gift.. And such meaning in all three verses.. Thank you for sharing Davy D and Rose with us too.. πŸ™‚ Lots of love dear friend.. take care xxx ❀

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Sue…i hope you enjoy their works too..

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  9. markmkane says:

    Awesome poetry. Simple but poignant in meaning!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much..

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  10. Excellent piece! You are the proof I was talking about! Inspired by Davy’s work to try something new and different and Boom! Something Beautiful. Please send this to Davy at the Go Dog Go Cafe! We need him to know how much of an Inspirator he is!
    Chuck

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    1. michnavs says:

      I already did Chuck..thanks for providing an avenue like this…😊

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  11. Di says:

    Hello Michnavs,
    In my opinion, saying more with less is an art, a gift. I think you are on the right path here by being inspired by someone whose work you admire. This is a beautiful poem and a heartfelt tribute…
    πŸ’œπŸ’œDi

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    1. michnavs says:

      Oh thank you Di..i am happy as always to see you drop by…

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      1. Di says:

        Thank you Michnavs… you are very welcome. And…the feeling is most certainly mutual πŸ™πŸΌπŸ’•

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  12. Beautiful photo, Mich. Your exquisite Haiku poems speak potently of eternal love. I wish you all the best, dear friend. Thank you so much for the sweet words. πŸ’‹πŸŒΉ

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Rose…πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

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  13. Lovely haiku and a beautiful photograph. Well done. πŸ€—

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much..☺

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  14. Jade M. Wong says:

    A truly lovely poem, michnavs.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Oh thank you Jade

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  15. What a gorgeous photo and lovely poem, I really love your new layout as well!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Kim….😊

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  16. rosemawrites says:

    awww. this is sweet and beautiful. love it

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Rosie..we missed you here..

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      1. rosemawrites says:

        awwww. missed you too!!!

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  17. Hi Mich-I was hoping that you would give your permission for us to post this on the Inspiration Wall of the Go Dog Go Cafe.
    Regards,
    Christine

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    1. michnavs says:

      Sure….i would be honored Christine…

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  18. This is lovely. πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Oh, thank you..

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  19. aspirantgoth says:

    This is a sweet poem. Beautiful. I hope you could visit my site and give feedback on how i can improve it. Thank you.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you for dropping by…will go check your blog now

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  20. Hi Mich!
    Hope you are well and in the best of moss to write.
    I was stunned to read this triple Haiku.
    The Love for your beloved is eternal, it depicts in the lines.
    Thanks for the links of Davy and Rummager, I shall on a trip to their blogs.
    With Great Love
    πŸŒ·πŸ’—
    Shiva🎢

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Shiva…and glad to see you back..

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  21. Read it as moods to write

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  22. blindzanygirl says:

    Beautiful

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    1. michnavs says:

      I am glad you thought so

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