Up unto the sky
Beyond life and even time
My treasure is you.
Over the night light
On the far side forever
My fondness is you.
And in afterlife
Farther than eternity
My passion is you.
I have been following the blog of DavyD “inside the mind of DavyD” for a little while now. I used to write long narrative verses. I seldom write short poems and verses, until I discovered his works. He writes brilliant and amazing short poems and verses most especially when he’d accompany it with an equally stunning photograph or computer-generated images. And just then that I thought I could try it myself too. This afternoon, on the way home I took this stunning photograph and wrote a triple haiku alongside as my expression of my eternal devotion to my beloved and of course as inspired by Davy’s beautiful short verses.
I have been writing short poems for a while now. I enjoyed the most my haikus which actually lead to a wonderful haiku collaboration with the talented Rose of the Poet Rummager.
So here’s for Davy https://davydblog.com ย and Rose https://poetrummager.com for inspiring me to try on short poems.
stunning photo, love the colours and delightful tributes to your lover – can you please add a link to DaveyD ๐
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Lol..forget the link..hehe
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thanks Mich ๐
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https://davydblog.com
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thanks visited briefly as I’m about to go out but bookmarked it to look at when I have more time, thanks Mich ๐
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Thank you kate๐
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Such a delightfully sweet post.
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Thanks Yassy…always happy to see you here…๐
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So am I.
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I love the photo, stunning, for sure. Beautiful triple haiku, I like how the third lines connect the three haikus. Wonderful work!
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Oh thanks Miriam..i am glad you like it..
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Triple haiku, triple the delight in reading them ๐โค๏ธ
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Thank you Nj.
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Lovely poetry, Mich.
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Thanks Og..
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Very nice done. The love comes out very strong. God bless your love. May your love, fondness, and passion always flourish. Am unable to follow the links๐ฃ
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Thanks so much…happy to see you here..
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Happy to read you
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I will send the link here again for you and see if you can get through them..
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This is lovely.
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Thank you.
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Of course!
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Mich the photo and poem are brilliant. I am humbled and honoured to have provided any inspiration. I agree with Miriam the connection between the three haikus is exquisite. You could put the haikus in any order and they would still work.
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Thank you Davy…i have been writing short poems and haikus lately and i guess i am loving it..
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Continue to write and share them Mich.
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Your talent for both styles is a true gift.. And such meaning in all three verses.. Thank you for sharing Davy D and Rose with us too.. ๐ Lots of love dear friend.. take care xxx โค
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Thanks Sue…i hope you enjoy their works too..
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Awesome poetry. Simple but poignant in meaning!
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Thank you so much..
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Excellent piece! You are the proof I was talking about! Inspired by Davy’s work to try something new and different and Boom! Something Beautiful. Please send this to Davy at the Go Dog Go Cafe! We need him to know how much of an Inspirator he is!
Chuck
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I already did Chuck..thanks for providing an avenue like this…๐
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Hello Michnavs,
In my opinion, saying more with less is an art, a gift. I think you are on the right path here by being inspired by someone whose work you admire. This is a beautiful poem and a heartfelt tribute…
๐๐Di
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Oh thank you Di..i am happy as always to see you drop by…
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Thank you Michnavs… you are very welcome. And…the feeling is most certainly mutual ๐๐ผ๐
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Beautiful photo, Mich. Your exquisite Haiku poems speak potently of eternal love. I wish you all the best, dear friend. Thank you so much for the sweet words. ๐๐น
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Thank you Rose…๐ค๐ค๐ค
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Lovely haiku and a beautiful photograph. Well done. ๐ค
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Thank you so much..โบ
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A truly lovely poem, michnavs.
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Oh thank you Jade
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What a gorgeous photo and lovely poem, I really love your new layout as well!
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Thank you Kim….๐
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awww. this is sweet and beautiful. love it
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Thanks Rosie..we missed you here..
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awwww. missed you too!!!
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Hi Mich-I was hoping that you would give your permission for us to post this on the Inspiration Wall of the Go Dog Go Cafe.
Regards,
Christine
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Sure….i would be honored Christine…
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This is lovely. ๐
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Oh, thank you..
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This is a sweet poem. Beautiful. I hope you could visit my site and give feedback on how i can improve it. Thank you.
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Thank you for dropping by…will go check your blog now
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Hi Mich!
Hope you are well and in the best of moss to write.
I was stunned to read this triple Haiku.
The Love for your beloved is eternal, it depicts in the lines.
Thanks for the links of Davy and Rummager, I shall on a trip to their blogs.
With Great Love
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Shiva๐ถ
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Thank you Shiva…and glad to see you back..
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Read it as moods to write
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Beautiful
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I am glad you thought so
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