Eternally (Triple Haiku)



Up unto the sky

Beyond life and even time

My treasure is you.

Over the night light

On the far side forever

My fondness is you.

And in afterlife

Farther than eternity

My passion is you.



I have been following the blog of DavyD “inside the mind of DavyD” for a little while now. I used to write long narrative verses. I seldom write short poems and verses, until I discovered his works. He writes brilliant and amazing short poems and verses most especially when he’d accompany it with an equally stunning photograph or computer-generated images. And just then that I thought I could try it myself too. This afternoon, on the way home I took this stunning photograph and wrote a triple haiku alongside as my expression of my eternal devotion to my beloved and of course as inspired by Davy’s beautiful short verses.

I have been writing short poems for a while now. I enjoyed the most my haikus which actually lead to a wonderful haiku collaboration with the talented Rose of the Poet Rummager.

So here’s for Davy  and Rose for inspiring me to try on short poems.

Published by michnavs

Philippine-born Michelle Navajas, currently residing in Malaysia. Michelle authored the book “After – Rain Skies: A Million Stars” for PWW during their Million Stars campaign. Graduated with a Master of Education majoring in English in the Philippines, Michelle was a former college professor, teaching literature, speech & oral communication, creative writing, drama, and theatre arts. Michelle is active in her writing profession and works as a freelance creative writer. Michelle passionately blogs at, where you can find her prose and poetry on love, life, motherhood, and her advocacy on abuse and violence. A published author on Spillwords NYC Her poem “Again” is published on three platforms, on MEDIUM -an International Writers and Readers Space, AFRICA WRITERS CARAVAN, and at WOMAWORDS LITERARY PRESS. kindly go check the following links – –

57 thoughts on “Eternally (Triple Haiku)

  1. Very nice done. The love comes out very strong. God bless your love. May your love, fondness, and passion always flourish. Am unable to follow the links😣

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  2. Mich the photo and poem are brilliant. I am humbled and honoured to have provided any inspiration. I agree with Miriam the connection between the three haikus is exquisite. You could put the haikus in any order and they would still work.

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  3. Excellent piece! You are the proof I was talking about! Inspired by Davy’s work to try something new and different and Boom! Something Beautiful. Please send this to Davy at the Go Dog Go Cafe! We need him to know how much of an Inspirator he is!

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  4. Hello Michnavs,
    In my opinion, saying more with less is an art, a gift. I think you are on the right path here by being inspired by someone whose work you admire. This is a beautiful poem and a heartfelt tribute…

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  5. Hi Mich!
    Hope you are well and in the best of moss to write.
    I was stunned to read this triple Haiku.
    The Love for your beloved is eternal, it depicts in the lines.
    Thanks for the links of Davy and Rummager, I shall on a trip to their blogs.
    With Great Love

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