BROKEN

I didn’t know
how broken I am
‘Till you said …

“I can make it without you”.

 

P.S.
Inspired by DavyD’s poem RAW https://davydblog.com/2017/03/07/raw/

 

20170702_091647

(Sketch by my 15 year old daughter)

40 Comments

  1. Very Nice. Both the poem and the drawing πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you..☺

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  2. calmkate says:

    deep raw emotion in that .. great sketch that captures your words perfectly πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks kate…

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      1. calmkate says:

        a pleasure Mich πŸ™‚

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      2. michnavs says:

        Happy Sunday kate

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  3. oglach says:

    Great collaboration.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yes Og…thanks

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  4. frankhubeny says:

    Nice drawing and poem.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Frank

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  5. Marvin says:

    Oh my! You’re unbelievably so good at words Mich!

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  6. Beautifully sad.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you..

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  7. Your Daughter is a very talented young artist Mich.. and has captured that broken look which you have created so well with your words …. Sending thoughts your way dear Mich xxx

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Sue .she’ll be happy to know your thoughts on her work..

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  8. What a lovely drawing and yes, it’s a perfect match for your words so beautifully crafted!

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    1. michnavs says:

      I am glad you like it..

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      1. Yes, very much so!

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      2. michnavs says:

        😊😊

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  9. rosemawrites says:

    oh my. This! TT^TT

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    1. michnavs says:

      Hush..hush…again…hehehe

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      1. rosemawrites says:

        πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€

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  10. Eccentric Muse says:

    So much emotion here! And the sketch is beautiful.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Oh thanks so much…

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  11. Davy D says:

    Excellent poetry Mich and I am so honoured to have been able to provide the inspiration.

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    1. michnavs says:

      You did ..thank you Davy.

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  12. Di says:

    Hello Michnavs,
    Such a deep and very meaningful poem, between your words, and your daughter’s drawing. Both beautiful in their own way πŸ’•

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Di .☺

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  13. NJ says:

    The words match the sketch and vice versa perfectly. Those few words pack in so much.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Nj..

      Like

  14. You and your daughter make quite the team! Magaling!!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Rose…😏

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  15. Wonderful sketch and poem to go with it.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks so much

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  16. idolwanderer says:

    Wow! Such a talented woman😍

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you☺

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