I didn’t know
how broken I am
‘Till you said …
“I can make it without you”.
P.S.
Inspired by DavyD’s poem RAW https://davydblog.com/2017/03/07/raw/
(Sketch by my 15 year old daughter)
BROKEN
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Philippine-born Michelle Navajas, currently residing in Malaysia. Michelle authored the book “After – Rain Skies: A Million Stars” for PWW during their Million Stars campaign. Graduated with a Master of Education majoring in English in the Philippines, Michelle was a former college professor, teaching literature, speech & oral communication, creative writing, drama, and theatre arts. Michelle is active in her writing profession and works as a freelance creative writer. Michelle passionately blogs at www.michnavs.wordpress.com, where you can find her prose and poetry on love, life, motherhood, and her advocacy on abuse and violence. A published author on Spillwords NYC https://spillwords.com/what-if-snowflakes-dont-fall-in-winter/ Her poem “Again” is published on three platforms, on MEDIUM -an International Writers and Readers Space, AFRICA WRITERS CARAVAN, and at WOMAWORDS LITERARY PRESS. kindly go check the following links –https://womawordsliterarypress.home.blog/2020/06/29/imagining-life-after-the-ravaging-virulent-covid-19-pandemic-a-special-journal/ –https://personalitiesofinspiration.wordpress.com/2020/06/29/imagining-life-after-covid-19-a-womawords-june-edition/ View more posts
Very Nice. Both the poem and the drawing 🙂
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Thank you..☺
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deep raw emotion in that .. great sketch that captures your words perfectly 🙂
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Thanks kate…
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a pleasure Mich 🙂
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Happy Sunday kate
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Great collaboration.
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Yes Og…thanks
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Nice drawing and poem.
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Thanks Frank
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Oh my! You’re unbelievably so good at words Mich!
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Thank you..
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Beautifully sad.
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Thank you..
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Your Daughter is a very talented young artist Mich.. and has captured that broken look which you have created so well with your words …. Sending thoughts your way dear Mich xxx
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Thanks Sue .she’ll be happy to know your thoughts on her work..
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What a lovely drawing and yes, it’s a perfect match for your words so beautifully crafted!
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I am glad you like it..
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Yes, very much so!
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😊😊
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oh my. This! TT^TT
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Hush..hush…again…hehehe
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😀 😀 😀
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So much emotion here! And the sketch is beautiful.
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Oh thanks so much…
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Excellent poetry Mich and I am so honoured to have been able to provide the inspiration.
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You did ..thank you Davy.
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Hello Michnavs,
Such a deep and very meaningful poem, between your words, and your daughter’s drawing. Both beautiful in their own way 💕
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Thanks Di .☺
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The words match the sketch and vice versa perfectly. Those few words pack in so much.
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Thank you Nj..
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You and your daughter make quite the team! Magaling!!
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Thanks Rose…😏
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Wonderful sketch and poem to go with it.
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Thanks so much
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Superb
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Thank you..
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Wow! Such a talented woman😍
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Thank you☺
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