Don’t bullshit me with your
“I love you’s”
None of them bears witness
To how I grieve
Of witnessing you walk away
Everyday.
Don’t fool me with your
“I miss you”
Nothing compares to the pain
You inflicted on me
For being near yet so far away.
Don’t lull me with your
“I wanna be with you”
Nonsense, though
For up and till now you
Remain a fragment in my dreams.
Don’t say you love me…
P.S.
An irrational (maybe for some) poetic rant of a woman in a coffee shop.
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Michelle Ayon Navajas is an international best-selling poet. Her 5th poetry book, "I Will Love You Forever, Too" went straight to the number ONE spot in Amazon and Kobo.Com on its first day of release in less than 24 hours. She also authored the poetry books "After Rain Skies", "What If Snowflakes Don't Fall In Winter?", "Oh! Dear One", "I Would Fly To Where You Are" and "After Rain Skies, 2nd Edition". She is a published author at Spillwords NYC, a three-time "Publication of the Month" nominee. Her poem "Holding Hands" is a Publication of the year in at Spillwords NYC for 2021. Her poetry appeared in several international literary magazines and anthologies.
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Oh the heartache of our human relationships, anger we vent, but fragile we remain.
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Lol….so true Ivor…so true…
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I’m posting an old poem of mine later, “Missing You”, but not anger of a broken heart, more about the love we once knew.
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I will check it out Ivor..
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so relieved that you added that PS .. I thought your long distance marriage might have the shakes ..
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Lol….eavesdropping Kate is the best inspiration…hehehe
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I used to be an expert in that, my hobby was to fill in the missing bits .. mentally 🙂
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Hahahahha..i am mastering the craft Kate..
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When someone we love breaks our heart, the anger and vulnerability both surface. Emotions can really rip our innards apart. It’s a pain like no other. Such passion, Mich. I don’t think I’ve ever heard you swear before. Lol. You should eavesdrop more often!! 😀
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Oh…my yeah..i just realized that too..lol…first time in wordpress..i got carried away…i enjoyed evesdropping lately hahaha
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😆 Well, wherever we writers can get inspiration, is perfectly fine. Lol.
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Sounds like the guy needs a good knuckle sandwich. If she was my girl, she’s be writing poems about what a sharp dresser I am and how I’m a really good kisser.
~PR
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Oooohhhh..hmmm…is that so?
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“Real time” poetry. I get it. Life is blended.
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Indeed it is…thank you..
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Haha, I hear ya! I absolutely love this piece.
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Oh thank you…i should evesdrop more..
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This. Is. Terrific.
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Thanks Brian..
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Irrational it may be but it has me captivated … because it is SO recognizable!
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I know right?…it is indeed i guees everyone’s rant at some point …
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A good rant clears the mind.
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Yeah it does ..thank you
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An interesting cafe scene, Mich!!
P.S. I hope the rain’s not bothering you too much these days.. xoxo
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Oohh …it rained so hard last week here ..and there was a flash flood in our area …good thing though our house is kind elevated …but the streets are flooded..
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Oh.. has the rain stopped this week? Glad to know you’re safe. Been raining here too but not too much..
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Yes Maria..rain has stopped here but the aftermath of the flood is a pain in the …….lol
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I hope she enjoyed the coffee Mich 🙂 Nice poetry. You managed to capture the full extent of her anger.
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Hehehehe thanks Davy
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Hello Michnavs,
I had trouble with WordPress last night and my comments are not displaying here. They have been going to Spam apparently.
I do hope this one makes its way to you…
🙋🏻👌💕
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Ooohh…wp glitches..it happens sometimes…i am happy to see you here
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Thank you!
Glad you found the comments in the end 🙋🏻💐
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I enjoy reading the poems inspired by snatches of conversation in the coffee bars you find yourself in, so much inspiration to mine and observe! This one is so lovely…
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Thanks Kim ..there’s just so much and so many to write about in an hour of stay in a coffee shop..this one is just part of it..
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I used to regularly read and soak up the atmosphere in coffee bars/shops, I must start the practice again, it’s like creating time to meditate! Hope your week is going well!!
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A powerful piece of prose that conveys so much!
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Thank you so much..
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Well worth the eavesdropping. The woman’s pain comes through – I hope she’s found clarity regarding her next steps – out the door.
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Lol…..she literally did walk out of the door .
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Good for her!
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Understandable rant actually. We all want the truth, we’d rather someone be straight forward. It hurts at first but in the end it leaves us with a much better taste than a former loved one who always lies instead of being truthful.
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Yeah…that’s why i got it so much…it happens to everyone at some point.
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
GLAD SHE GOT IT OUT..NOW CAN OWN IT AND THEN START TO HEAL!
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Thanks so much for the usual support..
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What a rant
Simply Beautiful
As Sheldon Always
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Thanks Sheldon..
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Oh was that the conversation you overheard? Oh my she was angry wasn’t she…well she told it like she felt…good for her!!
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I felt every word she said and before i realized it i was writing about it..
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It was very powerful and struck a chord with you.
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Wooooah. The anger is so vivid.
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Yeah i know right…hahahaha
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Wow! This was Amazing! Really loved the raw emotions. So true to life too! Ha!
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Thansk so much…i am really glad you like it..
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It’s gorgeous!
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Thanks Rob…
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Don’t! Don’t!! Don’t!!!
Shiva
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