Cold December (triple haiku)

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I shiver in the cold
As strong December wind blows
I remember you.

 

I shiver in pain
As it penetrates my skin
Come near me, my love.

 

I shiver and long
As I miss your warm embrace
Hold me please once more.

 

55 Comments

  1. Osyth says:

    Achingly beautiful words ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Owws thanks Osyth..been away for a long while..my “small crazy world” has gone crazier..lol..but i am hoping this is me coming back..

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      1. Osyth says:

        I do know the feeling … honestly, I do and I send you much strength on your journey back to some sort of normality ๐Ÿ™‚

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      2. michnavs says:

        Thanks Osyth..โ˜บ

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  2. Nandita says:

    Aww. This is so sweet and beautiful, Mich!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Ohhh thank you..am happy to be back..

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      1. Nandita says:

        Where have you been?

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      2. michnavs says:

        Been busy fixing my “little crazy world”…lol..

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  3. They work beautifully together and individually. Well done and stay warm!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks…glad you like it…

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  4. Aquileana says:

    Beautifully penned, dear poet ๐Ÿ˜€ Great saga of haikus… (your verses are warm, no matter how cold it could be outside!), sending love ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Aqui..i am happy you like it..

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  5. Singledust says:

    a beautiful and really sweet lover’s ache. i so feel the depth of your words.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Gina….i hope your well…

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      1. Singledust says:

        I am good Mich, thank you.

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  6. Welcome back. This is a stunning poem. ๐ŸŒผ

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Bridgid…happy to be back too..

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  7. Davy D says:

    Nice poetry Mich and clever use of the Haiku. We are expecting temperatures of -10 degrees C in the UK overnight. Hope it is not that cold where you are. Lovely to be reading your poetry again.

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    1. michnavs says:

      December is the coldest month of the year from where i am..but i suppose that’s nothing compare to the December cold in UK.

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      1. Davy D says:

        ๐Ÿ˜ฆ

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  8. Miriam says:

    Lovely hauntingly beautiful words Mich. Sending you warm hugs of friendship.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Miriam..

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  9. Tammy7711 says:

    Ohhh nice! I love it! Great job!

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      1. Tammy7711 says:

        You’re utmost welcome๐Ÿ˜Š

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  10. I can feel the ache & longing in your words…that desire for one last warm hug with the hope of changing one’s world…so glad to see you back here again, Mich!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Kim…โ˜บ

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  11. Very heartfelt and beautiful! So good to see you, My Friend!!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Happy to be back too….

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  12. markmkane says:

    AWESOME haikus! I need to step up my game now to get to your level. Keep up the great work!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks ..glad you like it..

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  13. Diana Tyler (Eccentric Muse) says:

    Beautiful! Simply achingly beautiful! โค

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you..โค

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      1. Diana Tyler (Eccentric Muse) says:

        Most welcome. ๐Ÿ™‚

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  14. Stunning Haiku poems, Mich! Your words banish the cold and shine warmth into the cold.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Its indeed cold here..as you know December is the coldest month in the Philippines, i suppose..

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  15. Ooh Cold December
    Penetrated my nose, lung
    Do not hold leave me

    Mich this is my Haiku
    Your triple Haiku is Wonderful ๐ŸŽถ๐ŸŒท
    Shiva

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks for the haiku you shared Shiva…enjoy the rest of the week..

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  16. idolwanderer says:

    Basahin koto mamaya hahaha parang interesting yung title ng article , medyo busy pa ngayon ๐Ÿ˜Š

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks..may mga tagalog poems at short stories din ako dian..

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      1. idolwanderer says:

        Sige po maya basahin ko mga tagalog hehehe di kasi ako magaling sa English ea kaya humanap ako.ng paraan na makapagsulat lang ehheh basahin ko yan maya

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      2. michnavs says:

        ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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  17. Sounds like you are not only feeling the cold but are hurting too.. Sending LOVE dear friend.. and I am happy you are posting again.. โค xx

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    1. michnavs says:

      Been away for a while Sue..๐Ÿค—

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      1. Sending LOVE.. xxx Hugs Sue xx

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  18. Beautifully written, I sense the ache.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Robertโ˜บ

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  19. I feel the pain in this one ๐Ÿ˜ฆ loneliness is the worst, especially during holidays.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Indeed it is..happy holidays..

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      1. Thank you. Same to you.

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  20. Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
    TRIPLY GREAT!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Always…happy christmas

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