You hit me the hardest, wounded deeply
Break my soul and destroy my spirit
Crushed me down and left me bleeding
Why do you love me so much?
And treat me so damn kind?
Yet, breaks my being
Tear me apart?
Why do i
Love you
Still?
Poetry…in Motion
I need an answer too. Your words are my thoughts. 🙂
Ohhh….how do we suppose find the answer?….
Some questions are best left unanswered
Some answers will unfold when the time comes
For now, all we do is wear our love on our skin
And hope love shows us the answer within
Amen to that Nandita…it will come…in time..
Yes. Keeping the faith
Ooh, so raw and emotional. ❤️
Thanks Mirriam..❤❤
Really interesting form that I’d never seen before. It lends itself well to the subject matter. Nicely done, Mich.
Thanks Og…sending you sunshine..
cause love’s a bitch. but this poem is great.
Oh thank you..and welcome on board
Lmao. So true.
Hahaha…☺
i love, love this! I melt with kindness shown to me and I understand how you say and feel about being broken. Only people we care about deeply can do this to us, wound us, hurt us, yet we remember their moments of kindness and we feel such love. This is my favourite poen of yours, so beautiful in its tragedy,
Your comment warms my heart…i am overjoyed….thank you Gina…and yes, it is truely the ones we love the most who are capable of hurting us..yet we never love them less for that…
I just wrote to someone on this same thing. we never lose anything of ourselves by loving someone, its soul enriching to be able to love freely even though we get hurt. its truly worth it in the end.
I always am in awe at how much wisdom i learn from you Gina…your insights are truely inspiring..
ahhh…you bring out the best of me Mich honey!
Why do you write a poem like this? Huhu
Relate much 😢😢😢😢
Ooohhhhh because i was inspired by your story…
Haha kaw ha🙈
My pleasure ,❤❤❤
Btw i saw your picture and fount out that you’re so pretty
Mahiya na tuloy ako🙈🙈🙈
Psssst….☺
Hahahaha 😊😊😊❤❤❤❤😇😇😇😇😇😇
Hi mich 😊 merry christmas ❤ enjoy this day with your family 😊😊😊
Wowsy! Fantastic inverted etheree, Mich!! Merry Christmas to you and your daughters, my lovely friend. xo
Thanks Rose…happy christmas …
Such painful way…
Oh thanks Ally happy to see you here..
My pleasure. 😀
Maybe there is no answer Mich and is why love keeps drawing us in. Another excellent Etheree.
Thanks Davy…
I used to be broken, but when I saw that you’re posting again, I am now a whole lotta hot love!
Oohh so nice..☺
Mich the Etheree is as beautifully constructed as so much broken is the content.
Shiva
Thanks Shiva..☺
Lovely! Great job!
Thanks tammy
Your’e welcome 🙂
Thanks so much..☺
The magic in your words truly captures pure emotions. You really write from the heart which is a wonderful gift. Thanks for sharing.
I am happy you felt that way ..thank you..happy holidays
So felt your words Mich.. and wounds are indeed the rawest from those we love the most..
Sending you special thoughts dear friend.
I hope you have a Magical Holiday Season.. Much love and Happiness for the New Year xxx ❤ xxx
Happy holidays..Sue…
They were Mich.. and sending lots of love and well wishes to you for a Happy 2018.. May you be blessed in all you do.. 🙂
This was well-constructed. Well done. 🙂
Thanks Diana…happy holidays..
You’re welcome. I don’t celebrate the holidays, but I hope you enjoy yours. Take care and God bless.
nice…
Thanks…welcome on board..
A truly beautiful poem. I love poems that are able to convey powerful meanings with few lines, like this one. I also like the descending order in which you’ve arranged the text.
Thank you so.much for such a beautiful comment…happy to have you on board..
Happy to be on board 🙂
Because pain needs an identity to cling onto. True love doesn’t cause pain, nor does it close doors. It opens them like exploring a new house. This sounds more like heartbreak or a lack of acceptance than love.
Admitting to my own hypocrisy in the previous paragraph. It takes time to get to that point of acceptance of course, but any pain isn’t cause by love, but more a lack of acceptance to whatever is, that maybe the external love is gone, and depleting the internal love.
Hope you feel better dude.
Thanks for that beautiful insights..
Great heartfelt write, and nice ladder structure on this write
that last line rings out hard
“Why do i
Love you
Still ?”
well penned.
It warms my heart to read your lovely comment..thank you..
Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
GREAT ANGUISHED FEELING!
Thanks for the reblogged
That’s why love is a four letter word
And love is a lesson that you never learn,need I say more
Oh, this was so hard to read. Hit me hard! Bravo!
Thanks…i am humbled..