Faithfully (Etheree)

It’s
Over
Yet I feel
Deep in my heart
I long and I cry
By my side, you will be
Friends, let’s not be! Oh hear me
Listen to what I say, dear, please
My soul wants you, my heart desires you
Forever this will be, yours faithfully.

 

P.S.

This poem is dedicated to a fellow blogger https://idolwandererblog.wordpress.com hop in and check his site and you will find out you…

45 Comments

      1. Tammy7711 says:

        No probbz!!! ๐Ÿ˜„

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  1. idolwanderer says:

    Wow thanks mich๐Ÿ˜ฐ๐Ÿ˜ข
    Dunno what i feel while reading๐Ÿ˜ญ
    ๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ’”
    Very niceโคโคโค

    Short but meaningful

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks…smileโ˜บโ˜บโ˜บ

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      1. idolwanderer says:

        I will thankyou h๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜โคโคโค

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  2. idolwanderer says:

    Wanted to share it in fb and tag you but don’t even know your real name ๐Ÿ˜ฅ

    Thankyou for this.

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    1. michnavs says:

      You can share it in fb…i don’t have an fb though..

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      1. idolwanderer says:

        Really mich? Also wanna see your face..

        But it’s ok I’ll wait for the time nlng na magkita tayo ni maria in personal

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      2. michnavs says:

        Check out with Maria..i gave my permission..

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  3. Ssameera :) says:

    Good one Mich..! โ™ฅ ๐Ÿ™‚

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  4. Nandita says:

    What a beautifully done etheree, Mich. Love it.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you…its fun to writw etheree….

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      1. Nandita says:

        Yes it is ๐Ÿ™‚

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  5. Osyth says:

    So poignant as to literally scratch the heart ….

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    1. michnavs says:

      Oh wow…your comment warms mu heart…happy holidays Osyth..

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      1. Osyth says:

        And I wish you and your loved ones a Holiday Season full of joy and laughter with a New Year to come filled with peace and contentment and overflowing with dreams come true โค๏ธ

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    2. Osyth says:

      Happy holidays to you and your loved ones too … May you enjoy joy and laughter together and look forward to a New Year filled with peace and contentment and life overflowing with dreams come true x

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      1. michnavs says:

        Ohh i love that Osyth…thank you so much..

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  6. ivors20 says:

    The style of the poem, Etheree, is cleverly constructed, and the words are beautiful Mich. Thanks for the blogger information, I’m hopping over now.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Ivor..happy holidays to you…warm greetinhgs from across the world..

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      1. ivors20 says:

        And seasons greetings to you.

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  7. Davy D says:

    Your pen and soul definitely connect with the Etheree Mich. Excellent poetry.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Davy…i have fun writing etheree..

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      1. Davy D says:

        I look forward to reading more Mich ๐Ÿ™‚

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  8. Singledust says:

    very cryptic message here Mich!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yeah..i wrote it for a fellow filipino blogger who’s state of love is on that mode…i hope it lifts his spirit …

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      1. Singledust says:

        how amazing of you, such a sweet heart, I hope it helps him too yes๐Ÿ’ž

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  9. You have been faithful to yourself Mich…
    You have now got hold of writing an Etheree and have been an expert.๐Ÿ‘Œ๐ŸŒน
    Shiva

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    1. michnavs says:

      I am enjoying it Shiva…thanks to you..

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  10. I have gone and followed your friend, shall read the blogs later with the translator on. Thanks

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Shiva..

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  11. markmkane says:

    Beautiful words. I can truly relate to this as I think back on the past when I truly felt like this!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much..

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  12. Again, I love the intentional way in which you’ve arranged the text; it makes even the physical structure of the words seem like art.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Josh..

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  13. On a cold winter’s day, your words create another ache that snowflakes cannot touch…I hope you are happy & well these days, Mich…best wishes for a wonderful new year to you & yours!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Kim….happy new too…God bless

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    1. michnavs says:

      โ˜บthank you

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  14. Great post, My Friend! This was so heartfelt and pensive. Filled with yearning! A sequel?
    Chuck

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Chuck..glad you like this ..

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  15. Awesome writing. I love this.

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