Silent Scream

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Silent Scream

when you’ve done everything,
and its never still enough.

when you look around
and see nothing else is left.

when you blink
and notice a little ray of hope.

then one day, when you’re gone
your silent screams be heard
at last!!

 

45 Comments

  1. Very nice I completely get the emotional spectrum you are trying to illustrate

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much…happy to see you here.

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  2. calmkate says:

    sadly so often true 🙂

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  3. Very thought provoking!
    And I love the photo

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    1. michnavs says:

      Oh thank you so much..

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      1. You’re welcome 🙂

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  4. Aamna says:

    And silence make more noise then words. Beautiful writing. 🙂 ♥

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts..

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  5. Nandita says:

    Silence is often loaded..with answers. Nicely done, Mich.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Nandita…☺

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  6. ivor20 says:

    Silence is not always golden, and it’s amazing how many screams go on, unheard.

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    1. michnavs says:

      That’s right Ivor…thank you for sharing your thoughts..

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  7. Miriam says:

    We need to keep noticing those rays of hope Mich. Lovely writing and photo.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Mirriam…happy to see you here..

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  8. Singledust says:

    the photo echoes your words Mich. I felt the helplessness. this entire poem is reminiscent of a Sylvia Plath gem. you are magnificent in your emotions!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Oh wow thanks Gina…your comment warms my heart..

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  9. This is so beautiful! I hear you and I can relate to the emotion.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much..☺

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      1. You are very welcome 🙂

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  10. idolwanderer says:

    I wanted to write something like this.. But diko talaga makaya😊

    Nice one mich.. Grabi yung mga linya mo 😢😢😢

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you…keep practicing….your almost there..

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  11. Davy D says:

    I agree with Gina, there is an echo of Sylvia Plath in this Mich. Nice evocative piece of poetry.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Davy for your thoughts..

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  12. To have someone hear our silent screams, I wonder what that would look like or feel like…the image gives me hope, if no one hears our silent screams perhaps the vast ocean can and with its calm waves, reach out to soothe our souls.

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    1. michnavs says:

      You have spoken well Kim..its true..we may not always need someone to literally hear our silent screams….nature would be enough to listen and carry on what our heart really desires…

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  13. Diana Tyler (Eccentric Muse) says:

    Powerful! Silence is more dangerous than noise most of the time.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yes it is Diana…thank you..

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  14. markmkane says:

    Wow, simple but powerful! It truly convey a powerful message!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you for saying that..

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  15. Loved your dark perspective here, Mich! Keep screaming those lovely words.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Rose..

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  16. rosemawrites says:

    oh what a powerful poem, and the perfect photo for it! Suuuuper!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Rose..musta ka?

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      1. rosemawrites says:

        Eto. unti unting nagbabalik. Miss ko na kayo dito. 😀 Kamusta ka??

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      2. michnavs says:

        Yeah namiss ka naming lahat….ok lng naman ako..the kids are doin great too..

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      3. rosemawrites says:

        Awwwww. Kamusta na sila? sino sino pang nandito pala? hehe.

        Happy to know all are great on your side! 😉

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      4. michnavs says:

        My eldest will be graduating from.college this march ..my 2nd fr senior high and my third is fr Junior high..the youngest is gr 8 now..ang bilis ng panahon.

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      5. rosemawrites says:

        Oooooh. Wow! And you look like a young woman too! Parang sisters lang kayo! Congratulations! 🙂

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      6. michnavs says:

        Thanks Rose..

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      7. rosemawrites says:

        You’re welcome, Mich!

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  17. A lovely picture to suit Mich, you have said the deepest of thoughts one has in their hearts.
    Your Silent Scream is being heard.
    🎶💞🌷
    Shiva

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    1. michnavs says:

      I am happy to know that Shiva..

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