Simply Love

Simply Love

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Sweet
Scented
Sensation
Love truely pure
I love you, i always do, i promise
No, nothing can change that’s constant i swear
Come rain or shine
I will brave
For you
Dear

 

Double Tetractys

First, let’s define a Tetractys. It sounds like the number 4 should play a significant role, but in my opinion at least, the connection is a stretch at best. But we’ll go with it because the term has been around longer than you and me both.

The Tetractys was invented by British poet Ray Stebbing, but he didn’t invent the name. Euclid, the great Classical mathematician, believed that the numbers 1, 2, 3, and 4 must have some mystical significance because their sum was 10. He called this relationship a tetractys. Thus, a tetractys is four numbers whose sum is 10.

So what does that have to do with poetry? Well, Ray Stebbing learned about Euclid’s tetractys and decided to use it to create a new stanza of five lines with a syllabic count of 1-2-3-4-10. He further stated that each time an additional set of five lines is added, the syllabic count is to be reversed.

Thus a Double Tetractys (the object of our study today) would have a syllabic count of 1-2-3-4-10-10-4-3-2-1.

A Triple Tetractys would look like 1-2-3-4-10-10-4-3-2-1-1-2-3-4-10, and so forth. As you can see, like the Etheree, the Tetractys may also be reversed.

Mr. Stebbing hoped the Tetractys would catch on and become Britain’s answer to the Japanese Haiku. Of this form he said, “Its challenge is to express a complete thought, profound or comic, witty or wise, within the narrow compass of twenty syllables.”

So in summary, the Double Tetractys is

A decastitch (10-line stanza) with an emphasis on the syllabic count of each line.Syllabic count: 1-2-3-4-10-10-4-3-2-1It should express a complete thought and may be on any theme and express any mood.Rhyme is optional.

 

It’s Your Turn!

Now it’s time for you to write a Double Tetractys. Here are a few suggestions to get you started:

Choose a topic. It can be anything. If you’re struggling for an idea, you might consider the Daily Prompts from The Daily PostDON’T worry about rhyme, as it’s not necessary here.DO keep a handle on the syllable count for each line.Try to avoid filler words. Instead, use a thesaurus to find precise words that give you the right syllable count for each line.Don’t be afraid to break a word if need be, but avoid it if possible. Or perhaps you may want to go crazy with word breaks, so as to enhance a humorous mood.And of course, when you are finished, share your poem with the rest of us.

Don’t know how? Follow these simple steps…

Write your blog post.Include the tag Decastich Challenge or 10LPCInclude a pingback/link to this post in your post so I can find you.Publish your post.

50 Replies to “Simply Love”

  1. Oh my gosh, fascinating Mich. I might have one day, have a go at this dinosaur(T-Rex) of yours. But I think it’s beyond this oldish, almost illiterate poet.

  2. How amazing. I’ve never heard of this! Oh hell, I didn’t even know that 1,2,3,4 added up to 10. How pitiful is that?

    It’s so interesting. Now, so far as writing a Tetractys–that’ll take awhile! :-). But yours is brilliant. it flows so well.

    Great work Michnavs, 🙂

  3. POETIC EXPERIMENT
    Leave a reply
    That

    pesky

    pussy cat

    just purrs all day

    Her shiny fur she licks until it’s clean

    A tiny fly distracts her eye–and jumps

    Down to catch it

    But she lands

    Into

    Mud!

    A “Tetractys”—my first. “)

    –Jonathan Caswell

  4. Just wanted to stop by and say hello
    Today my pen is full of tears
    She don’t want to write…
    She just wants to see the words come out someone else mouth
    This pen is the owner of a lonely heart

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