Poetic Experiment

Here is something from my fellow blogger and long time follower and supporter in response to our double tetractys challenge…

 

POETIC EXPERIMENT

That

pesky

pussy cat

just purrs all day

Her shiny fur she licks until it’s clean

A tiny fly distracts her eye–and jumps

Down to catch it

But she lands

Into

Mud!

A “Tetractys”—my first. “)

–Jonathan Caswell

13 Comments

    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks…Jonathan would be delighted to know that..

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      1. Cool. Him and I talk all the time

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      2. michnavs says:

        That’s great..

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  1. calmkate says:

    lol I like this one, nice story to it!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Its cute right?

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      1. calmkate says:

        absolutely cute 🙂

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  2. Very lively and fun poem, Mich! Great collaboration. Poor muddy pussy car!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Lol ..yeah..

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  3. rosemawrites says:

    too adorable, Mich!

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  4. What a sweet poetic experiment…I am a cat-lover and Jonathan’s words made me smile!

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  5. 🤔🙄👌👍🔔

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