Tonight (Mirror Cinquian)

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Tonight,
You’re beside me
With thoughts of tomorrow
And forgetting yesterday just
Tonight.

Let me
Be the one to hold your dreams and
Make them come true for you
I  love you, so
Let me.

 

A Cinquain is a 5-line poem (quintet) with a set line length of 2-4-6-8-2 syllables. It does not rhyme, although I suppose it could rhyme if you wanted it to.

A Mirror Cinquain, then, is a 10-line poem (decastich) made up of two Cinquains, where the second is reversed, forming a mirror image of the first.

So in summary, the Mirror Cinquain is

A decastitch (10-line stanza) with an emphasis on the syllabic count of each line.Syllabic count: 2-4-6-8-2-2-8-6-4-2It should express a complete thought and maybe on any theme and express any mood. Rhyme is optional.
It’s Your Turn!

Now it’s time for you to write a Mirror Cinquain. Here are a few suggestions to get you started:

Choose a topic. It can be anything. If you’re struggling for an idea, you might consider the Daily Prompts from The Daily PostDON’T worry about rhyme, as it’s not necessary here.DO keep a handle on the syllable count for each line. Try to avoid filler words. Instead, use a thesaurus to find precise words that give you the right syllable count for each line. Don’t be afraid to break a word if need be, but avoid it if possible. Or perhaps you may want to go crazy with word breaks, to enhance a humorous mood. It just so happens that I made lines 1 and 10 the same in both sample poems, but this is not a rule. They only have to be 2 syllables, not necessarily identical, so don’t feel as though you must also do that. And of course, when you are finished, share your poem with the rest of us.

Don’t know how? Follow these simple steps…

Write your blog post. Include the tag Decastich Challenge or 10LPCInclude a pingback/link to this post in your post so I can find you. Publish your post.

15 Comments

  1. Davy D says:

    A beautiful poem Mich and this is a form I have not encountered before. I will put some thoughts to it this week.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Go ahead and try Davy…its fun..you will love it..

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  2. ivor20 says:

    Again Mich, you’ve introduced me to another new form of poetry, you are so very talented and learned.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Ivor…its always fun to work on different forms of poetry..

      Like

  3. calmkate says:

    so richly beautiful, the mother and lover present in each word!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Spot on Kate…i am happy you said that..

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      1. calmkate says:

        you express yourself well Mich and your poetry is unique!

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      2. michnavs says:

        Thanks…it warms my heart..

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  4. rosemawrites says:

    poetic fooooorms!!! im super super thrilled! this is amaazing

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Rose..happy you like it..

      Liked by 1 person

  5. Linda Luna says:

    I love this! “Tonight… Tonight…” and “Let me… Let me…” That was neat.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Happy to know you like it..thanks..

      Like

  6. Singledust says:

    you describe the night with promise and this is one of the most achingly beautiful poems from you Micg.

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    1. michnavs says:

      You said it well Gina..thank you always..

      Liked by 1 person

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