Stuck (Etheree)

Stuck
In the
Middle of
Life’s crossroad paths
What we missed; must go
Least we live in the past
And can’t let go; the present
Is a must to live and enjoy
For nobody gets closer, as future
Remains a vision, when we are just stuck.

 

32 Comments

  1. Well written! Very good piece! You did well!

    For the photo I my piece will be:-
    Only you by your precious blood on the cross has made me free from sinful slavery. No longer caged to the world of darkness. I’m forever yours and you’re my covering. Thank you Jesus ❤

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    1. michnavs says:

      Oh thanks Tammy..very inspiring…

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    2. Hélène Vaillant says:

      Beautiful Tammy. Speaks to my heart.

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  2. Miriam says:

    Lovely writing Mich. the present is a good place to be. In the moment. 💕

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanka Mirriam and yes, its always good to be in the moment

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  3. Gina says:

    being in the middle isn’t such a bad place to be sometimes, it’s the start of letting go, knowing we have the strength to move forward. if we start at one end we may topple and fall, I like your thoughts, they are so balanced with vision and practicality

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Gina for sharing your insights here..this poem has been in my notes for a while and i just found it fitting for the photo prompt..

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  4. janowrite says:

    Very insightful – great post!

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  5. Winnie says:

    Wonderfully written and very well said!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Winnie..

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      1. Winnie says:

        You’re welcome! 😊

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  6. Oh such a wise etheree which flows soooo smoothly

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      1. You’re welcome, Mich!

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  7. Hélène Vaillant says:

    Absolutely perfect for this prompt Mich. “Stuck
    In the
    Middle of
    Life’s crossroad paths
    What we missed; ”
    This speaks volumes… the way we move unconsciously, missing the guidance in our path. There is hope in your poem stating that the present is what’s important. Well written Etheree.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you ..i am glad you like it..

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  8. calmkate says:

    Very profound words Mich, so insightful 🙂

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Kate..

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      1. calmkate says:

        you’re most welcome, so glad you’re back again 🙂

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  9. So true. We should never lose sight of our todays.

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  10. markmkane says:

    Simply true words that echo what we all need to adhere to. Such a timely post for me and where I am in my life. Thanks for sharing.

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    1. michnavs says:

      I am glad it resonated on your current state .

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  11. Wonderful poem… We all of us at times often can feel stuck and ‘caged’ We indeed must live and enjoy… Now is the only moment… and we must try to make each moment count.. ❤ LOVE to you Mich.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Sue for sharing your insights here

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      1. You are most welcome.. xx

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  12. Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
    CHALLENGE MET—AND CONQUERED!

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