Stuck
In the
Middle of
Life’s crossroad paths
What we missed; must go
Least we live in the past
And can’t let go; the present
Is a must to live and enjoy
For nobody gets closer, as future
Remains a vision, when we are just stuck.
In response to:
Tuesday, October 2nd, 2018
Welcome to “What do you See?”http://helenevaillant.com/2018/10/02/what-do-you-see-october-2nd-2018/
Reply with your choice of poetry or short story,
whatever represents what you (see) (feel) (within you) about this week’s photo.
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This week’s challenge photo:
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Well written! Very good piece! You did well!
For the photo I my piece will be:-
Only you by your precious blood on the cross has made me free from sinful slavery. No longer caged to the world of darkness. I’m forever yours and you’re my covering. Thank you Jesus ❤
Oh thanks Tammy..very inspiring…
Most welcome 🙂 all honour to God!
Beautiful Tammy. Speaks to my heart.
❤ ❤ blessings!
Lovely writing Mich. the present is a good place to be. In the moment. 💕
Thanka Mirriam and yes, its always good to be in the moment
being in the middle isn’t such a bad place to be sometimes, it’s the start of letting go, knowing we have the strength to move forward. if we start at one end we may topple and fall, I like your thoughts, they are so balanced with vision and practicality
Thank you Gina for sharing your insights here..this poem has been in my notes for a while and i just found it fitting for the photo prompt..
Very insightful – great post!
Thank you..
Wonderfully written and very well said!
Thanks Winnie..
You’re welcome! 😊
Oh such a wise etheree which flows soooo smoothly
Thanks Rose..
You’re welcome, Mich!
Absolutely perfect for this prompt Mich. “Stuck
In the
Middle of
Life’s crossroad paths
What we missed; ”
This speaks volumes… the way we move unconsciously, missing the guidance in our path. There is hope in your poem stating that the present is what’s important. Well written Etheree.
Thank you ..i am glad you like it..
Very profound words Mich, so insightful 🙂
Thank you Kate..
you’re most welcome, so glad you’re back again 🙂
So true. We should never lose sight of our todays.
Thank you..
You are welcome.
Simply true words that echo what we all need to adhere to. Such a timely post for me and where I am in my life. Thanks for sharing.
I am glad it resonated on your current state .
Wonderful poem… We all of us at times often can feel stuck and ‘caged’ We indeed must live and enjoy… Now is the only moment… and we must try to make each moment count.. ❤ LOVE to you Mich.
Thanks Sue for sharing your insights here
You are most welcome.. xx