Indifference -poem

Indifference

I am an empty hand,
Reaching helplessly to hold another.

I am the sand tossed by the sea,
Nothing and bare naked.

He was my rock,
Torn by his apathy.

 

 

39 Comments

  1. i may interpret it wrong but it feels like when we throw ourselves completely into some thing others don’t feel the same and their indifference can affect our mental stability. a very multi layered poem Mich that has many thoughts spinning in my head. brilliant!

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  2. Mich, your poem has multi-layers of meaning, my imagination does centre on the loneliness of being forgotten. Does that makes sense? The feelings in your words are almost tangible.

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  3. “I am an empty hand,
    Reaching helplessly to hold another”
    This really touches me. Thank you for this beautiful poem.

    Like

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