Heartbeat (double haiku)

Every key you strike

Is the fast beat of my heart

Tugs up back to you

 

The melody hum

Is my soul’s deepest lovesong

Carry on my love.

 

Written for: Willow Poetry – What do you See

This week’s photo Prompt:

piano

 

52 Comments

  1. Really super post, Mich!!! Bravo!!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Chuck..

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  2. Hélène Vaillant says:

    Beautiful haiku Mich.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Helene..

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  3. That is such a cool picture! I love your response to it. So lovely! Especially the second half of the piece.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you ..Helene picked that photo.

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  4. calmkate says:

    ooh I’ve seen a few renditions of this amazing pic … and I like yours best Mich … pssst please don’t tell the others 🙂

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    1. michnavs says:

      Lol….thanks Kate…still bleeding out haiku..

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      1. calmkate says:

        lol at least you can count … beggared me 🙂

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  5. iidorun says:

    “My soul’a deepest love song” 😍😍 the most romantic line!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Oh thanks Irma….😊😊

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  6. Sameera says:

    Beautiful!❤️

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    1. michnavs says:

      Oh thanks Sammy

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  7. blindzanygirl says:

    These are lovely. I LOVE haikus! And I love writing them too. Now you have got me round to thinking I must write some more. I had run out of ideas for longer poems lol. These are GREAT

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you ..go ahead and write some..haiku is actually really fun to write..

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      1. blindzanygirl says:

        I have written quite a lot a d they are on my Blog. But I want to write more. It is quite a chalkenging form because it would be easy to write something that does not have much meaning behind it, yet you can get VERY deep meaning into just a vew words, yes, it would be nice to write some more. Thanks mich

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  8. Diana Tyler (la muse excentrique) ☕ says:

    These are beautiful haikus, Mich!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Oh thank you Di..

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      1. Diana Tyler (la muse excentrique) ☕ says:

        You’re welcome!

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  9. Beautiful Mich… your poetry speaks volumes.. ❤

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  10. markmkane says:

    I truly loved the second haiku the most. Very deep and poetic.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you…i am glad you thought so..

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  11. Mich, such romantic ones! 💕

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Punam ..still having a haiku hang over .lol

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      1. You are so welcome.
        Don’t let go of the hangover! We are getting to read lovely haikus. 😀

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      2. michnavs says:

        😉😉😉

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  12. Jade M. Wong says:

    Ohh this is lovely, my friend, lovely and magical!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Jade.😊😊😊

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks so much..

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  13. Akhila says:

    Haiku apt for the pic…👍

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks so much…am happy to see you here..

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  14. Bernie Delaney says:

    I love the romanticism here, really lovely Mich.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Bernie…😉

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  15. Jordy says:

    Lovely, energetic poem!!

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  16. this is just so sweet and so tender. that last line is kilig kilig.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Am.happy kinilig ka hehe

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  17. Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
    A DOUBLE HAIKU—-I LOVE IT WHEN A POET TALKS THIS WAY! 🙂

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Jonathan..

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  18. da-AL says:

    Beautiful 😃

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