Written for: https://mythsofthemirror.com/2019/01/16/iceman-januarys-writingprompt/
Hey!
Say it.
Don’t keep it.
What have I done?
Control not yourself,
Loosen up, don’t restraint.
I can’t read between the lines.
Tell me, it is breaking my heart;
I know I am damn, I am hurt too.
We’re dying, this air, this space, killing us.
Diana, of Myths of the Mirror, has created a new, monthly photo prompt. We are challenged to write something about it. Find out the details, and join in at the above link. Thanks, Diana!
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Michelle Ayon Navajas is an international best-selling poet. Her 5th poetry book, "I Will Love You Forever, Too" went straight to the number ONE spot in Amazon and Kobo.Com on its first day of release in less than 24 hours. She also authored the poetry books "After Rain Skies", "What If Snowflakes Don't Fall In Winter?", "Oh! Dear One" and "I Would Fly To Where You Are". She is a published author at Spillwords NYC, a three-time "Publication of the Month" nominee. Her poetry appeared in several international literary magazines and anthologies.
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Thank you..
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Wonderful Etheree Mich.
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Thank you Helene…😊
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My pleasure.
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I really liked this whole piece, but especially these two lines:
“I cant read between the lines.
Tell me, it is breaking my heart”. There’s such a wonderful melancholy to it. 🙂
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Thank you…for always stopping by with your gracious insights .
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Not at all a problem! 🙂
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Such a beautiful piece! I love how it’s made up of such simple, tight lines, but it conveys so much feeling and emotion.
I took one look at the prompt picture and I couldn’t help it. I just had to do my own take. It was just calling out to me:
https://cosistories.wordpress.com/2019/01/17/the-cold-alone/
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Thank you so much..Diana would be glad to have you on board.. Did you provide her with your link?..
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You’re welcome and thank you!
Yep! I gave her the link. It took me a few minutes to find the right post to attach it to, but I got it. 😆
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😊😊
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Lovely piece Mich!
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Thanks kate…😊
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you’re most welcome Mich!
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Beautiful Mich. You write so well.
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Oh thanks Bridgid…😊
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This is amazing, Mich! ❤️
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Thanks Winnie…happy to know that..
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You’re welcome, Mich!
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Isn’t it amazing and fun and incredible how a speculative photo and challenge can lead us all on such different ways? Love the direction you went here.
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Thank you..and yes i was also reading the takes of others on this photo prompt and its amazing to know that there are so many talented writers waiting to be discovered..
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I posted my speculative fiction today, but it’s not based on Diana’s photo – just inspired by it. ;-0
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I will go and check it out now…😊😊😊
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Great take on the prompt, nicely builds, as the subject builds so do the lines.
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Thanks..glad you like it
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🙂
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
SO A CLASSIC!–SONNET AND ILLUSTRATION!
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Thank you..
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GOOD STUFF YOU HAVE!
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this is so beautiful. so much to go with the picture, mich
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Thank you..😊
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Reblogged this on Myths of the Mirror and commented:
A prompt-inspired etheree from Michnavs. Enjoy
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Thanks Di..😊
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Very welcome! Thanks for taking up the prompt!
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Fabulous response…loving this challenge
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Thank you..
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Well done, Mitch. It’s beautiful!
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Thank you Robert😊
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It inspired me. 🙂
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Thanks Rob.
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Brings to mind a recent avalanche in the news… mixed news at saving those caught.
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Thanks Jules..
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Well done!
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