Written for: https://mythsofthemirror.com/2019/01/16/iceman-januarys-writingprompt/
Hey!
Say it.
Dont keep it.
What have i done?
Control not yourself,
Loosen up, don’t restraint.
I cant read between the lines.
Tell me, it is breaking my heart;
I know i am damn, i am hurt too.
We’re dying, this air, this space, killing us.
Diana, of Myths of the Mirror, has created a new, monthly photo prompt. We are challenged to write something about it. Find out the details, and join in at the above link. Thanks, Diana!
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Thank you..
Wonderful Etheree Mich.
Thank you Helene…😊
My pleasure.
I really liked this whole piece, but especially these two lines:
“I cant read between the lines.
Tell me, it is breaking my heart”. There’s such a wonderful melancholy to it. 🙂
Thank you…for always stopping by with your gracious insights .
Not at all a problem! 🙂
Such a beautiful piece! I love how it’s made up of such simple, tight lines, but it conveys so much feeling and emotion.
I took one look at the prompt picture and I couldn’t help it. I just had to do my own take. It was just calling out to me:
https://cosistories.wordpress.com/2019/01/17/the-cold-alone/
Thank you so much..Diana would be glad to have you on board.. Did you provide her with your link?..
You’re welcome and thank you!
Yep! I gave her the link. It took me a few minutes to find the right post to attach it to, but I got it. 😆
😊😊
Lovely piece Mich!
Thanks kate…😊
you’re most welcome Mich!
Beautiful Mich. You write so well.
Oh thanks Bridgid…😊
This is amazing, Mich! ❤️
Thanks Winnie…happy to know that..
You’re welcome, Mich!
Isn’t it amazing and fun and incredible how a speculative photo and challenge can lead us all on such different ways? Love the direction you went here.
Thank you..and yes i was also reading the takes of others on this photo prompt and its amazing to know that there are so many talented writers waiting to be discovered..
I posted my speculative fiction today, but it’s not based on Diana’s photo – just inspired by it. ;-0
I will go and check it out now…😊😊😊
Great take on the prompt, nicely builds, as the subject builds so do the lines.
Thanks..glad you like it
🙂
Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
SO A CLASSIC!–SONNET AND ILLUSTRATION!
Thank you..
GOOD STUFF YOU HAVE!
this is so beautiful. so much to go with the picture, mich
Thank you..😊
Reblogged this on Myths of the Mirror and commented:
A prompt-inspired etheree from Michnavs. Enjoy
Thanks Di..😊
Very welcome! Thanks for taking up the prompt!
Fabulous response…loving this challenge
Thank you..
Well done, Mitch. It’s beautiful!
Thank you Robert😊
It inspired me. 🙂
Thanks Rob.
Brings to mind a recent avalanche in the news… mixed news at saving those caught.
Thanks Jules..
Well done!