Thump-poem
As i lay in bed last night
I dream of you and slept tight
And in my dream i got thump
I felt a huge gigantic hump
Over my shoulders
I shed some tears
I am pushed away
And off i stay
The banging
And thumping
Continued
I cried
It pains
It hurts
Heavy
Steady
Woke up in a dream
Oh how my tears run in stream
I painfully cry
I could die
That huge gigantic hump
I felt i got thump
Was my heart beating in agony
You left me in dismay.
Note:
This is in response to Diana’s photo prompt for February – a Pixabay image by Marianne Sopala.
You can check out her February challenge here
https://wordpress.com/read/feeds/47652712/posts/2157235242
February’s Speculative Fiction Prompt
I wanted to write something about the elephant and the cute little mice on its literal sense; but i realized it would be so much fun to give this adorable elephant a different life and a different persona (so to say).
It is brilliant. Great idea mich
Oh, thank you i am glad you thought so..😊
A beautiful story, very clever of you to have given this life to the poem.
Thank you Helene..it was a bit challenging at first but when i decided to give the elephant a different life i cant stop writing..
How special it is to write spontaneously like that.
Indeed Helene..😉
Nice, Mich. Thanks so much for the poem and for playing along! I have it lined up to go. 😀
Your welcome Di..i am happy you like it..
Wonderful writing ✍️💙😀
Oh thank you..😊
Oh dear things that go Thump in the night, Beautifully done Mich…XXX …. Funny, but I wrote about a dream that went thump in sleep last night…….
Thank you Ivor..😊
quite a painful dream – but so original!
Thank you Gina..happy Sunday..😊😊😊
a good one! Diana does bring the best in us!😊
Twas an intriguing prompt..but once i get started i cant put my pen down…
Wow! I mean, wow!
Ohhhh..thank you😊
You have provided a unique perspective, Mich.
Thank you Punam…😊
You are welcome, Mich. ❤️
You have a way with imagination, Mitch! ❤
Thanks Maria…i thinks that’s my gift…lol
lol good take on the prompt, really enjoyed it ❤
Thanks Kate..i know you will enjoy it just the way you did with my “unsual poem” entry in one of your friday foto prompts..
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Another fresh take. I hope you enjoy Mich’s poem.
Thanks Di..
Very welcome. 🙂
thumping verses. If you have time do visit my poem Here
Thanks..i will be right there..
Aww this was so cute Mich!
Oh thanks Jade😉
Well done!
Hey..thanks.
A very enjoyable read, a lovely take on the challenge!
Thank you Dina..😉
Wonderful!
Thank you..
Very nice!
Thank you😊
I like your take on the prompt for your thumping poem, Mich!
Thank you Miriam..
You’re welcome, Mich.
Go where the prompt leads!
Looks like the elephant just wanted to share a warm space 😉
Thanks Jules…🤗
Beautiful michs
Thank you😊
😀 😀
I feel as if there is something here that makes the theme symbolic of something deep and painful. I may be reading too much into your poem, Mich. Either way it works well with the theme. 🙂
You can be correct on that note Robert..
It’s powerful.