The Way -poem

 

Help me find my way to get through you

There are not many options I can do

I am lost and I am tired

It has been a long way

Still, I can’t see

The light

Hold me

Take me there

To where you are now

Even just for a moment, please

Let me see you through at the end

I need this chance to see you wave adieu

Written for Helene of Willow Poetry

Photo prompt for this week:

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51 Comments

  1. Gina says:

    This is sweet serendipity. Looking for a way to find the one our heart longs for. One day Mich. One day it will be. Hugs my friend. Love the flow of your poem. Like a song.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Gina..thank you…it just came out of my heart, so to say..😊

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      1. Gina says:

        Spilled like precious pearls my dear its beautiful in its simple longing

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  2. calmkate says:

    So lovely Mich … finding your way together 🙂

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks so much Kate😊

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      1. calmkate says:

        you’re most welcome Mich 🙂

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  3. syncwithdeep says:

    cute michs

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      1. syncwithdeep says:

        😀

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  4. Hélène - Willow Poetry says:

    Ah, how precious it is, longing for the one, to be reunited in spirit. Absolutely beautiful Mich. ❤

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    1. michnavs says:

      Indeed Helene….thank you.m

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      1. Hélène - Willow Poetry says:

        My pleasure, 🙂.

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  5. Jade M. Wong says:

    I absolutely love your interpretation of the photo prompt! You made the maze such a poignant symbol, Mich.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Jade..😚

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  6. So lovely this simple longing.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Punam..

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  7. blindzanygirl says:

    Brilliant mich. love it

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    1. michnavs says:

      Oh thank you Lorraine..

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  8. V.J. Knutson says:

    Interesting – a person or personality as a labyrinth – it works!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks for saying that VJ

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      1. V.J. Knutson says:

        You are so welcome!

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  9. iScriblr says:

    Precious indeed!❤️

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  10. -Eugenia says:

    Heartfelt yearning. Beautiful.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Eugenia..

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      1. -Eugenia says:

        My pleasure!

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  11. markmkane says:

    Touching words that truly evoke strong emotions as I read it!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Mark..

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  12. Beautifully penned, Dear Friend!! I agree with Eugenia – heartfelt and yearning!
    Love that your heart is whispering to your soul to put words on paper!!
    xoxoxo

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Chuck..

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  13. Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
    THOSE ENDING RELATIONSHIPS, MAN, THEY HURT! I’M STILL HOWLING IN GRIEF OVER ONE OF MY FASHION BLOGGER FRIENDS WHO STOPPED BLOGGING…for now!I THINK…THAT WAS OVER A YEAR AGO. SURE WISH WE KNEW WHAT TO SAY!

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    1. michnavs says:

      I am sure your friend will find a way to be back…blogging..

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  14. SORRY to put so much of my comment in the reblog window. Real or no, that feeling takes a long while to go! 😦

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Jonathan..

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      1. MOST WELCOME YOU ARE 🙂

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  15. Creative take on the prompt, Mich. I so enjoyed this. 🙂

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  16. iidorun says:

    That last line – regret, sadness at not being able to get closure….😢 ❤️

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    1. michnavs says:

      😐😐😐indeed there is sadness in it Irma..

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  17. Wonderfully written. Life is a maze we all keep working our way through, Sending Love my friend ❤

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yes its true Sue..and as always we hope to find our way out..

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      1. We will given time.. 🙂

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  18. pvcann says:

    That deep yearning

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