Balance- free verse

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When you are complete

and feel you have that perfect

sense of harmony

no amount of distraction

nor a mighty burden

will ever topple you down

from standing on your toes

perfectly balanced

P.S.

In response to V.J.’s weekly challenge.  We were asked to look back and check on our last week’s post and look for a word or phrase that is/are essential and have been repeating themselves.

To join in the fun hop into her site.

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26 Comments

  1. poetryfromtheinkwell says:

    This is true. Way to go balancing this in a perfect verse 🙂

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    1. michnavs says:

      Oh, thank you😊😊

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  2. Sidharth says:

    Life is about maintaining a balance otherwise, things do fall apart. Thank you for sharing such a blissful and meaningful post. According to your convenience please do read some of my writings would love to know what you think about them.😀😊

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks for dropping by and sharing your thoughts here..

      I will be right there..

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      1. Sidharth says:

        Thank you for respecting my request 😊

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  3. V.J. Knutson says:

    You describe the state we all strive for, I believe. Thanks for this. I will recopy it to the actual challenge page, so I won’t overlook it on the wrap up.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Oh sorry i put the link on the wrong page…Sorry VJ and thank you..

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  4. Gina says:

    Centering.. To have perfect balance. Your poem has perfect balance too.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Gina..😊😊😚

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  5. Hélène - Willow Poetry says:

    Beautiful poem, perfect balance.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw thanks Helene

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  6. murisopsis says:

    I see gymnasts performing in tandem and with amazing strength and perfect balance doing the impossible!

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    1. michnavs says:

      That’s right …and we hope to achieve the same balance too in life

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  7. May you remain always in Balance dear Mich , lovely poem. ❤

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  8. calmkate says:

    so very true and powerful, thanks Mich!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thannks Kate..😊

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      1. calmkate says:

        you’re most welcome Mich 🙂

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  9. Of all the poses we practice in yoga class, I believe the one most challenging for everyone is tree pose. The balance pose. I work on it day and night in my yoga, in my mind, in my work, and in my relationships. Your poem is just perfect. 🙏

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    1. michnavs says:

      Oh thank you..happy to.know it resonated on you..

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  10. markmkane says:

    Simple and subtle but poignant words that really convey true meaning!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you 😊

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  11. Create Space says:

    Beautiful words! I’m sensing exactly that, a lot more, lately!

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