Picnic -Haibun

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It’s the world-famous beach. White sand and crystal clear water. We run, we stroll, we jump, we crawl. We eat. We laugh. We watch….the sun sets perfectly along the horizon

Raindrops on the beach
Waves splashing on the seashore
Summer rain falling

 

Gina hosts a picnic haibun at dVerse https://dversepoets.com/2019/04/29/haibun-monday-that-picnic/

 

P.S.

My first attempt for dVerse

43 Comments

  1. calmkate says:

    absolutely delightful … welcome back Mich ❤

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Kate…i followed what you told me to just start joining now…and yey i did…😉

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      1. calmkate says:

        good for you and what a delightful beginning 🙂

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      2. michnavs says:

        😊😊😊

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  2. Frank Hubeny says:

    The beach is a wonderful place to be.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Frank..it is indeed

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  3. Rupali says:

    Life is simple we make it complicated.
    Beautiful post so natural.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Oh thank you…🤗

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  4. blindzanygirl says:

    Lovely mich. wish I was on that beach!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Its always a wonderful place to see God’s love for humanity..

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      1. blindzanygirl says:

        It sounds gorgeous mich. our beaches in England tend to be rather cold for much of the year, but even then, it is wonderful to hear the sound of the sea. It is so fresh along our coasts.

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      2. michnavs says:

        Oh, we have the world famous beach and we grew up hanging there every summer..

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  5. Ah, such a lovely picture you have painted, Mich! ❤️

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Punam😊

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      1. You are welcome! 😊

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  6. Gina says:

    this was such a sweet start and love that you jumped right into it Mich!! your Haibun is just sparkling! i am just by your side running and splashing on that beach, you made it come alive for me. and a beautiful haiku, perfectly seasonal and joyful. thank you for participating!

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    1. michnavs says:

      It has always been in my blogging list to join dVerse, but i was kinda apprehensive reading all the works of the others including yours…but here i am…😊😊

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  7. Create Space says:

    Beautiful first attempt!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Oh thank you and i am glad to see you here ..i have been trying to leave a comment in your site since i first read kate’s interview but for some weird reasons i can’t…i will try again this time.

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      1. Create Space says:

        Thank you! I hope it works this time.

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      2. michnavs says:

        Yey..it did…i hope it won’t vanish ..lol.

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  8. duroncharlene says:

    Awesome

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you..

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  9. Winnie says:

    That’s Taal, right? Wonderful Haibun.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Oh thanks Winnie..

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  10. poetryfromtheinkwell says:

    A beautiful haibun.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you..

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      1. poetryfromtheinkwell says:

        You’re welcome.

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  11. Anita Bacha says:

    Successful attempt, I must say, Mich.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Anita😊

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  12. “the sun sets perfectly” – for me, that says everything. That sense of inner glow.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Sarah..

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  13. A picture of Bliss… and loved your words.. ❤
    Stay Blessed Mich… Wonderful to see a post in the reader as work my way down it today ❤

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Sue…happy to be back too

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you chuck

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  14. A wonderful post, Dear Friend! Beautifully penned! So very happy to have you back!
    xoxo

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Chuck..i am glad to be back too

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  15. This is very good for a first attempt.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks..glad you like it

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  16. Garfield Hug says:

    This is so peacefully serene! For some strange reason, these posts did not appear in my reader till you alerted me. So I did a search and found a fea of your posts I missed!!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Oh WP glitches..it normally happens..

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