The Moon and The Stars -Quadrille

I wondered many times
as I hide
about the stars
the moon
up in the sky so high
flustered at the sight
how they filled up the sky

Am I a moon or, just one of the stars
you keep counting on the sky?

Written for D’Verse. WimsyGizmo is hosting Monday Quadrille
at D’Verse Poets.  He has prompted us with the word “Up”.

Also for Helene of  Willow Poetry, What Do You See?

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55 Comments

  1. Joy says:

    Deep… but it’s good to go deep once in a while, it keeps us human.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you..and i see your new in my site..so welcome on board..i hope you enjoy the rest of my poems..

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  2. calmkate says:

    profound poem Mich, we often ponder this
    [I was last night
    cos the stas were so bright]
    … and what a sweet pic 🙂

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Kate…its so good to know we are on the same page..

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      1. calmkate says:

        we certainly are, last night the sky was SO clear it was mind blowing! And so bright here as there are no lights 🙂

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      2. michnavs says:

        I could imagine how beautiful that is kate..😊😊

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      3. calmkate says:

        This is really such an amazing place to live in Mich … just need the water and a loo ..

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  3. Hélène - Willow Poetry says:

    A profound poem Mich, thank you for sharing it for the challenge.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Your welcome Helene

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  4. Frank Hubeny says:

    I liked the question in the last two lines.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Frank

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you..

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  5. Fiery says:

    Wonderful and pensive. Enjoyed this so much xx

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you..😊

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  6. murisopsis says:

    It is all perspective! Thanks for a thought provoking poem!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you for saying that..

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  7. Winnie says:

    A wonderful play of words, Mich! I loved it!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Winnie..

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  8. A beautiful question and lovely quadrille Mich🙂

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you..appreciate that..

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  9. Grace says:

    I love your questions at the end. Indeed something to mull over.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Grace and its fun joining dVerse..

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  10. Rupali says:

    Lovely.
    It’s very common in India where a mother refer to her child as moon 🙂

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    1. michnavs says:

      Oh, thank you Rupali for sharing that..

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  11. whimsygizmo says:

    I ponder the sky often, myself. Love this.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you..and your prompt was fun to work with .

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  12. Great piece! 🙂
    “You are my sun, my moon, and all my stars” — E.E.Cummings

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks for sharing that .😊

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  13. Beautiful, contemplative composition, Mich.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Punam..

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  14. iidorun says:

    Beautiful poem! It can across to me as thoughts a young person might have when falling in love for the first time.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Irma…it can really be about that too..

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  15. What a beautiful way you have with words Mich. I love the sky at night and watching the moon and the stars. Priceless.

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    1. michnavs says:

      The sky at night is more wonderful when viewed from your beautiful garden Bridgid..

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  16. You dear Mich are a Star… and you are learning to shine brightly again my friend..
    Love and Hugs.. ❤

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    1. michnavs says:

      Oh thanks Sue…those are so sweet of you to say that..😊

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      1. It is the truth.. I apologise for my absence also.. I have not been visiting other blogs other than those who comment recently, purely for the reasons I have not had time, not that I have forgotten you or others..
        Take care dear friend… and remember…. YOU are Special… Do not let anyone say otherwise.. ❤

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      2. michnavs says:

        Thank you Sue..your kind words warm my heart😊

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Chuck

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  17. Beautiful, beautiul, beautiful.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you..😊😊

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  18. To be a part of the sky for someone is rewarding, be it moon or a star.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you..😊

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  19. whimsygizmo says:

    Love this, Mich.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you.. i has fun with the prompt..

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  20. Jules says:

    Too many questions and quests to count. Lovely verse. 🙂

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Jules.

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  21. merrildsmith says:

    Lovely pondering, and nice flow to your quadrille. I like that final question.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Merril…am glad you like it

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  22. sanaarizvi says:

    This is such a stunning poem! 🙂 To answer your question I believe you are something that supersedes the moon and stars! ❤️

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    1. michnavs says:

      Awww that is so nice..😊

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