I wondered many times
as i hide
about the stars
the moon
up in the sky so high
flustered at the sight
how they filled up the sky
Am I a moon or, just one of the stars
you keep counting on the sky?
Written for D’Verse. WimsyGizmo is hosting Monday Quadrille
at D’Verse Poets. He has prompted us with the word “Up”.
Also for Helene of Willow Poetry, What Do You See?
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Deep… but it’s good to go deep once in a while, it keeps us human.
Thank you..and i see your new in my site..so welcome on board..i hope you enjoy the rest of my poems..
profound poem Mich, we often ponder this
[I was last night
cos the stas were so bright]
… and what a sweet pic 🙂
Thanks Kate…its so good to know we are on the same page..
we certainly are, last night the sky was SO clear it was mind blowing! And so bright here as there are no lights 🙂
I could imagine how beautiful that is kate..😊😊
This is really such an amazing place to live in Mich … just need the water and a loo ..
A profound poem Mich, thank you for sharing it for the challenge.
Your welcome Helene
I liked the question in the last two lines.
Thank you Frank
Great post 😁
Thank you..
Wonderful and pensive. Enjoyed this so much xx
Thank you..😊
It is all perspective! Thanks for a thought provoking poem!
Thank you for saying that..
A wonderful play of words, Mich! I loved it!
Thanks Winnie..
A beautiful question and lovely quadrille Mich🙂
Thank you..appreciate that..
I love your questions at the end. Indeed something to mull over.
Thank you Grace and its fun joining dVerse..
Lovely.
It’s very common in India where a mother refer to her child as moon 🙂
Oh, thank you Rupali for sharing that..
I ponder the sky often, myself. Love this.
Thank you..and your prompt was fun to work with .
Great piece! 🙂
“You are my sun, my moon, and all my stars” — E.E.Cummings
Thanks for sharing that .😊
Beautiful, contemplative composition, Mich.
Thank you Punam..
My pleasure!
Beautiful poem! It can across to me as thoughts a young person might have when falling in love for the first time.
Thanks Irma…it can really be about that too..
What a beautiful way you have with words Mich. I love the sky at night and watching the moon and the stars. Priceless.
The sky at night is more wonderful when viewed from your beautiful garden Bridgid..
You dear Mich are a Star… and you are learning to shine brightly again my friend..
Love and Hugs.. ❤
Oh thanks Sue…those are so sweet of you to say that..😊
It is the truth.. I apologise for my absence also.. I have not been visiting other blogs other than those who comment recently, purely for the reasons I have not had time, not that I have forgotten you or others..
Take care dear friend… and remember…. YOU are Special… Do not let anyone say otherwise.. ❤
Thank you Sue..your kind words warm my heart😊
Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
Thanks Chuck
Beautiful, beautiul, beautiful.
Thank you..😊😊
To be a part of the sky for someone is rewarding, be it moon or a star.
Thank you..😊
Love this, Mich.
Thank you.. i has fun with the prompt..
Too many questions and quests to count. Lovely verse. 🙂
Thank you Jules.
Lovely pondering, and nice flow to your quadrille. I like that final question.
Thanks Merril…am glad you like it
This is such a stunning poem! 🙂 To answer your question I believe you are something that supersedes the moon and stars! ❤️
Awww that is so nice..😊