’twas like nightmares
trying to scream
and nothing comes out
no matter how hard
you try
’twas like drowning
trying
to breath
underwater
and you can’t
simply can’t
’twas like missing a step
your foot is suspended
in air, you know
it should felt
solid ground
but you
have no idea
what’s happening
if you ever feel solid ground again
or you’ll just fall forever
longing just to be near you feels like that
(my soul is an empty road without you)
This week’s World of Words prompt, “kahidlaw”, a Bisaya word which means “deep longing”.
Every week, Rosemarie (of A Reading Writer), Maria (of Doodle Scribbles), and Jade will post a word from a different country. world.https://jademwong.wordpress.com/2020/03/23/poetry-reunion/
The current virus scare has left most of us locked down at home. But sadly, it has also left some families apart too.
Most of us if not all miss home; but most of those at home miss the world outside.
Sending more love guys 💗💗💗
wow if that’s your view, how amazing! You nailed people’s anxiety …
That “wow” from you kate really made my day..thank you..
good, you deserve that Mich 🙂
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True and beautiful writing
Thank you so much..
So true Mich, people missing home, many families in forced separation. I’m sure it will be a valuable lesson. X
It should be a lesson to all to take every minute as if its our last.
Amen to that Mich! Xx
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Beautifully expressed Mich. The longing was felt in your words.
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Oh thank you Drew…to have you say that means a lot.
Keep safe in there…and be well..
Sending love to you too Mich. Must be so hard for families separated 💙
It must really be so hard Mirriam..
Keep safe 😊😊😊
Missing a loved one is a such personal pain
The day is bath in sun, but your drowning in rain
“’twas like drowning
trying
to breath
underwater
and you can’t
simply can’t”………. I eventually did breathe again….
Oh, i know how it pains you to lose and miss your beloved….😊
Beautifully written Mich. I feel so sad for those who have died alone separated from their loved ones.
I know Bridgid..losing a love one alone is double the agony of not being able to say goodbye
So true, Mich! Beautifully expressed that anxiety. ❤️
Thank you Punam..sending you love ❤❤
You are welcome and love to you too! ❤️❤️
I feel that rising, breathless panicky feeling in those words. It’s just how it is. Well written Mich!
Thank you Chris…and i hope you are safe wherever you are😊😊
Sending lots of B love and hugs your way.
Oh thank you Sadje…💗💗
You’re welcome 😉
So powerful and true, SweetMich!
You’ve captured so poignantly how all of us are feeling right now.
❤ and (((HUGS)))
Thank you Carolyn..sending you love😊😊😊
Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
Thank you chuck
this poem says to me how much we will miss something only when it is taken away, we think we have enough time to do all we want but it is never true. you articulate the echo form many hearts with this poem
I agree Gina..that’s why we need to treat each day as if its our last.🤗🤗🤗
Oh wow! They call it “falling” in love for a reason 💜 I hope you and your girls are healthy and safe this week!
Thank you Jade…keep safe in there.
Very accurate descriptions.
Last year I (not far) fell off a ladder expecting that step…that wasn’t there.
Especially those of us now labeled as ‘seniors’ need to be aware not to take unexpected risks.
Stay safe and healthy! (hugs).
You be safe especially at this time…😊😊😊