Our Love

NaPoWriMo Day 11

Our optional prompt for the day is based on the concept of the language of flowers.

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with
trembling knees
we walk steadily
where
roses laid
down the aisle
symbolic
of love
pure and true
will
you take
my hand forever
and
hold me
never let go?
from
this day
forward to eternity
we
love until
our dying days

 

P.S

The poetic form used is hay(na)ku consists of a three-line stanza, where the first line has one word, the second line has two words, and the third line has three words.

Published by michnavs

Michelle Ayon Navajas is an international best-selling poet. Her 5th poetry book, "I Will Love You Forever, Too" went straight to the number ONE spot in Amazon and Kobo.Com on its first day of release in less than 24 hours. She also authored the poetry books "After Rain Skies", "What If Snowflakes Don't Fall In Winter?", "Oh! Dear One" and "I Would Fly To Where You Are". She is a published author at Spillwords NYC, a three-time "Publication of the Month" nominee. Her poetry appeared in several international literary magazines and anthologies. Follow her online: www.michnavs.wordpress.com IG @michnavspoetry FB Poetry by Mich You Tube Poetry by Mich Amazon Author Central Goodreads

30 Comments

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  11. *sigh* this is absolutely lovely and I love this poetry format! I’ve never heard of it, but I will start experimenting with it. I think it was the perfect format for your poem.

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