Gorgeous

And now for our (optional) prompt. Today, I’d like to challenge you to write a poem in the form of a review. But not a review of a book or a movie of a restaurant. Instead, I challenge you to write a poetic review of something that isn’t normally reviewed. For example, your mother-in-law, the moon, or the year 2020 (I think many of us have some thoughts on that one!)

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Tall, dark and handsome I swear,
that’s what you are
you are charming in many ways
it shows by the way you care

like how you always make the solid first
impression
that takes my breath away as you swoon everyone in any situation

impressive it is when you seemed to be always composed
even in the most difficult situation, never react never imposed

when mad, you barely speak up, you smile,
laugh over issues
silence for you is more effective than angry words

you make the most sincere remark when praising others
your kindness is undeniably hands down solid
I am impress

I swear my friends are head over heels crazy about you
they giggle and laugh and (sometimes flirt) yes they always do

you are a perfect gentleman, polite respectful and considerate
you even do the classic “pulling a ladies chair”
for her to sit

“protective” could be your last name, your furious when someone
else screws with me, hurt me or against me, you are for me more than anyone

you are the best, to say the least, it has been a long while
a really long while and I miss you around with your smile

you will be another year older this month, you’d love a celebration
that’s without a doubt, you always cook as preparation

happy birthday, you are the most gorgeous when you smile
and the happiest when you blow your candles with style

Happy birthday, how long has it been dad?
so long, and it still makes me sad.

 

P.S.

A poetic review of my father on his birthday

28 Comments

  1. Oh, what a sweet and special tribute to your father! I know you miss him so much! You were fortunate to have such a wonderful dad! Thank you for letting us all honor him, with you, on the day of his birth. 🙂
    I will do something fun today to acknowledge and celebrate him! 🙂
    (((HUGS))) ❤ 🙂

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    1. michnavs says:

      Wow thank you Carolyn..i will drop by your site to check it out.
      😊😊😊

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      1. Oh, I didn’t mean on my site…I meant in my life…today as I go about my day I will think of him and do something fun to acknowledge him.
        I probably won’t blog anything on my site today. I’m having a busy day. 🙂

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      2. michnavs says:

        Lol…me and my super excited self…lol.
        😉😉😉
        It is good though that you are keeping yourself busy amidst all these pandemic thing as almost every one else (i read from the news) is getting burned out…

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  2. calmkate says:

    ouch your hubby sure has big shoes to fill! I really thought this was about him …

    You were certainly Daddy’s favourite, and he yours ❤

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    1. michnavs says:

      Lol…thank you kate😊😊😊

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      1. calmkate says:

        hugs for you as you miss him so much!

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      2. michnavs says:

        Thank you..i do miss him…
        A big lot..🤗

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      3. calmkate says:

        that’s obvious, but sure you make hubby feel special too 🙂

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      4. michnavs says:

        I do kate😊

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  3. Sadje says:

    How lovely and poignant.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Sadje😊

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      1. Sadje says:

        You’re welcome 😉

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  4. SnowHearT says:

    Akala ko sa umpisa husband niyo po ang paksa,,,saad ko tuloy sa aking isipan “Sana All” while reading it….then ipinagpatuloy ko….awe ang sweet niyo po…swerte po niyo na may Tatay po kayo na gaya niya…Bakit po may kirot akong naramdaman. Pakiwari ko’y nangungulila po kayo sa kanya.

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    1. michnavs says:

      He passed away 10 years ago and its still seemed yesterday..😐

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      1. SnowHearT says:

        Ayyyy, sorry to hear that po.,,,alam ko po masakit pa rin iyon kahit 10yrs. ago na. His in God’s naman na po.

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  5. This gets me right in the heart.
    A daddy’s girl.
    Bless you

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    1. michnavs says:

      I am..and will always be Drew…😐

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  6. Gorgeous it is, Mich. Such a sweet tribute to your dad. Hugs dear. 🤗❤️

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Punam😊😊😊

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  7. murisopsis says:

    Your dad sounds every inch the gentleman! Girls need fathers so that they can become strong and independent women.. Sounds like he did a great job and is recognized by the only one who counts – you!!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Val..yes he was a gentleman; the kind you will only read now in the book and novels..😊😊😊

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  8. parikhit dutta says:

    This is so sweet and adorable 🙂

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    1. michnavs says:

      Oh thank you😊😊😊

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